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Laura Taylor

Fri 4th May 2012 14:51

Cheers for your equally world-weary comments on Wilfully Blind ;D Appreciate it Chris, as I know it isn't one of my best but like I said, I just had to get something out about him. I was lying on my sickbed last week watching him drool his way through his statement and it was all I could do not to kick the telly in. Obscene.

Anyhoo, yep, we're all systems go for the next Spoke - looking forward to it. Just finished me setlist today as it goes :)

Can only agree with your really short comment on your poem (heh) - sometimes, you can actually hear the HEADLINES themselves coming out of people's mouths and you know exactly where they've got their 'info' from. I find the attitudes of the majority of my fellow working class heartbreaking and deeply disturbing. Can't agree with you on the 'genuine' right wing though mate. They stand for everything I am against. Zero tolerance.

Anyhoo - it's proper refreshing to hear you rant on about all this - balm to the soul :)



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Yvonne Brunton

Thu 3rd May 2012 20:16

Hi, Shirley I am pleased I was able to help you and happy that you were able to rescue your poem
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Emma Stradling

Thu 3rd May 2012 20:10

Hi Glyn. Well I should update my profile as I've now managed to read my work out twice now! I must admit that I lost my nerve and pulled out on Tuesday but it just didn't feel right. Apart from that I'm glad I read my poems out and I think they went down well. I sat back down so fast im not sure! Hope it goes well for you.

I'll have a look at your poetry. Is it your poem The King of Thorns that you'd like me to read?

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nick armbrister

Thu 3rd May 2012 19:51

hi Shirley thanx for replying, yes i like your poems. glad you resolved your issue, things like that are important:)

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Thu 3rd May 2012 18:14

Stokes Croft or Gloucester Road familiar? recognise name/profile pic

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Glyn Pope

Thu 3rd May 2012 17:53

I've got to read out loud for the first time in September. I'm rehearing what I've going to say already. I'm terrified.

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Shirley Smothers

Thu 3rd May 2012 17:00

Hi Nick. Thank you for your comments on my poem "Kids With Drugs-2". Sorry it took so long to get back to you. I have been distracted. I found one of my poems on another website but was not given credit for this poem. The situation has been resolved. I have even posted a haiku "Stolen Poem" about my experience. Also thanks for your comments on my poem. "The Sea".

Thank you again for your nice comments.
Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Thu 3rd May 2012 16:52

Thank you for your help and advice on my stolen poem. I was able to prove that the poem is mine. The website took it down. I have even written a haiku "Stolen Poem" about my experience.
I would not have had a problem with my poem being posted on this website if I had been given proper credit.

Thank you again for your help.
Shirley

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Chris Co

Thu 3rd May 2012 16:52

Hi Yvonne,

Thx for reading and commenting upon my latest poem- very much appreciated.

I think what you said was very pertinent and on the mark. I've left a very loooong and waffling comment upon the poem.

Far from concise but it might give people an idea where I'm comming from.

My Best

Chris

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Shirley Smothers

Thu 3rd May 2012 16:50

Thank you for your advice on my stolen poem.
I took the advice of Yvonne Bruton and was able to prove the poem is mine. The website took down the poem. I have even written a haiku "Stolen Poem" about this experience.
I would not have had a problem with the website if I had been properly credited.
Thanks for your help

Shirley

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Chris Co

Thu 3rd May 2012 16:50

Hi Laura,

Thx for commenting upon my latest poem- very much appreciated.

I've left a looong comment back on the poem hehe.

P.S

Are we still good for next months 'spoke'?

Best

Chris

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Chris Co

Thu 3rd May 2012 16:48

Hi M.C,

Thx for commenting a couple of times on my latest poem. We may not agree on our politics...but I do thank you for both reading and commenting upon the poem- very much appreciated.

Best

Chris

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Chris Co

Thu 3rd May 2012 15:37

Hi Isobel,

Thx for reading and commenting on the poem.
Very much appreciated. I've left a response on the blog.

My Best

Chris

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Greg Freeman

Wed 2nd May 2012 23:55

Cynthia, thanks for your perceptive comments on The Show. Appreciated.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 2nd May 2012 23:52

Cheers, Laura

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nick armbrister

Wed 2nd May 2012 21:30

@Isobel, thanx on your views. im just me and do my best in my art. ive done a full NATALIE series poems. ill msg you them. my gothic lady friend in argentina likes, as do some of her friends. so that matters more than words to me. im quite anti war now but my new friend is a soldier (english) lol. rather mad, two opposites. xxx

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Isobel

Wed 2nd May 2012 21:22

You have an unusual style Nick - I've enjoyed reading some of yours - you choose different subject matter to most poets :) We are all reeds, I think. x

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Isobel

Wed 2nd May 2012 21:16

Thanks for your comment on my valentine poem. I'm glad you enjoyed - it was a bit of fun for me and a way of exorcising my demons :)

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Wed 2nd May 2012 00:30

Thanks Cynthia for the positive on 20/20 vision.

I have done an edit (as was suggested by Ray)

The picture came after the poem Cynthia..it does not really have to be there at all.

Again thank you for your time. :)

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 1st May 2012 22:25

Yvonne- it could be both?!

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 1st May 2012 19:32

Thank you Yvonne- :o)

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Andrew Brown

Tue 1st May 2012 13:03

Thank you for your comment, Robert. Unfortunately, I don't think Ella ever lived to see this poem, but she was quite convinced I'd been at those dances with her!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 1st May 2012 08:40

Thanks, Yvonne, for your comments on The Show. A rare excursion into rhyme and some sort of metre for me!

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Andy N

Mon 30th Apr 2012 23:30

Hi Yvonne - doing this 30 poems in 30 things has proved knackering. Felt I am going to take a temporary back seat but i shall be back soon - glad you liked this xx

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Mon 30th Apr 2012 23:16

cheers Lynn
for the wellycome back-xx

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Mon 30th Apr 2012 22:34

Thank you so much for your welcome and lovely words about my poem

I really like Bins, it evoked for me an intensly emotional allegory of humanity's selfishness and blindness to the suffering surrounding us everywhere. The starving ignored by the world, our heartless treatment and use of the little people who have no say in their lives and their use, and the ultimate selfishness of war.

The rhythm of your poem is brilliant; rushing along from the beginning in their busy "lives" then slamming to a sharp stop with the last lines and the sharp contrast between their life giving function and war, with the possibility of destroying us all.
Wonderful


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Robert Mann

Mon 30th Apr 2012 20:58

Andrew,
I like the tribute to Ella and her memories a great deal. I can imagine the dancehall, the rose scented perfumes and the smell of brylcreem and floor polish. I suspect she was delighted too.

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Philipos

Mon 30th Apr 2012 18:49

Hi Greg, 'Bugsy' bear with me while I do a trawl.

CHEERS. P.

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Philipos

Mon 30th Apr 2012 18:44

Hi Nicky, 'Ireland with Betjeman', thanks for commenting - gave me an opportunity to peruse your 'Stuff' clever use of its many meanings.

CHEERS.

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winston plowes

Mon 30th Apr 2012 18:43

Hi Yvonne, yes thats the word a sort of detached 'loneliness' that always comes across in these computer voices. I thought at the end it (he) sounded rather deseprate! Win

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Chris Co

Mon 30th Apr 2012 18:28

Thx for commenting on my last Gus. Glad you like it.

Memories seem to be a theme that neither of us strays too far from. They're always there wanting to have their say.

I can say that is something in your case that I am thankful for.

Best

Chris

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 30th Apr 2012 17:42

Thank you Jane- (re On stolen sheets)I often write in an almost flippant way only to find the 'feeling' emerge at a later reading. 'dark'- as you comment upon- has opened up another facet of the piece. Tommy

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winston plowes

Mon 30th Apr 2012 17:41

Hi Jane, text posted up on the computer voice blog entry. Win x

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 30th Apr 2012 11:48


Cheers Win- I had struggled with the 4th myself and at 3am called it a night. Thanks for the comments and advice. Tommy

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Greg Freeman

Mon 30th Apr 2012 10:52

It could well have been the George, Win, probably was, in which case I'm sorry to hear it has gone - although for some reason the names Brown or even Spotted Cow come to mind. It was all a very long time ago! Btw, your current pic looks a bit like it was snapped through a space capsule - though I suppose it's your barge window.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 30th Apr 2012 10:07

Hi Alison, thanks for your perceptive comments on The Show. It's show week next week! Greg

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winston plowes

Mon 30th Apr 2012 10:05

Re the computer emotions - glad you concur. This seems like a discussion thread in the blogs section but it was the only way I could include the audio, thx for commenting. Win

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Greg Freeman

Mon 30th Apr 2012 10:05

Thanks for your technical comments on The Show, John, which I'm very grateful for. I plead guilty to the accusation oft levelled at managers by football fans: "You don't know what you're doing!"

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winston plowes

Mon 30th Apr 2012 10:04

Hi Again Greg. I believe the newspaper offices were near the pedestrian crossing opposite WH Smiths. They have now mooved to near the traffic lights and town hall. And also that the pub you mention could have been the Criketers or the now gone George. Win

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Greg Freeman

Mon 30th Apr 2012 10:02

Thanks for your comment on The Show, Jane, which buoyed me up no end, since I'm not actually an amateur thespian. On the other hand, I'm very close to someone who is!

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Greg Freeman

Mon 30th Apr 2012 09:47

Hi Win, thanks for your kind comments on The Show and The Cruet Set. Little did I know when I left the district office of the Yorkshire Evening Press in the mid-1970s that 35 years on I'd be corresponding with a former resident of the town - no doubt in short trousers when I was around - and a current one whose tunes and lyrics give me a laugh night after night. I remember Gowthorpe, of course - our little upstairs office was on it - and a Sam Smiths pub that did excellent meat pies at lunchtime, which put me on the path to the current shape I am. Greg

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Rafal Nowakowski

Mon 30th Apr 2012 07:39

Welcome, Ann,
that's great idea, I'll check blog section, and put there at lat these translations. In fact, I need more translations..

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winston plowes

Sun 29th Apr 2012 23:16

Hi Greg, Re John battering songs, I have strong boyhood memories of the Selby friers. There was this one chip shop right (On Gowthorpe in the middle of the town). We called it "Fatty Bowls'" The two elderly brothers serving were always decked out in matching white 'overalls' had slicked back pure white hair. Must get more accurate details from my mum. lol

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Philipos

Sun 29th Apr 2012 17:04

Hi MC, Echoes. Much appreciate the comments. Ta v much.

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Philipos

Sun 29th Apr 2012 16:49

Hi Greg, Echoes. Many thanks for your kind comments which are always very much appreciated.

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winston plowes

Sun 29th Apr 2012 13:52

Hi John, Re Easington, glad you liked. And an added insight of someone who has 1) been down mines and 2) someone who must have confronted the desperation of these mining towns in their decline.

I would love to go down a working mine. Or should I say love to make myself go down a working mine.

Win

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Yvonne Brunton

Sun 29th Apr 2012 11:02

thanks for your comment on 'Whisker', Lynn. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a whisker from my little black furball of mischief which inspired it. XX

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 28th Apr 2012 21:18

Ann thank you for commenting on Chaff. It's good to see you back. Have you been doing anything nice, or just having time out?

My best,

Graham

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Sat 28th Apr 2012 19:55

Hi Charlotte, heard you at BSTG thursday jus gone . . . Enjoyed very much, all the more so as you dont compromise and follow the fashion for such contrived verse . . . Kind regards dominic . . .

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Hi Charlotte, heard you at BSTG thursday jus gone . . . Enjoyed very much, all the more so as you dont compromise and follow the fashion for such contrived verse . . . Kind regards dominic . . .

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