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Ian Whiteley

Mon 11th Mar 2013 14:42

Yvonne
sincere thanks for your kind comments on 'Copernicus....' I really appreciate your continued feedback.
Cheers
Ian

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Yvonne Brunton

Sun 10th Mar 2013 23:50

Thanks for your kind comments on my songs M.C.
I enjoy pottering around in the folk scene ( got bitten by the bug in Manchester as a teenager) - now Doncaster has to put up with me!
I'm impressed with your letter to the Times being published . I fire the odd one off to the Telegraph but no luck so far.
Yvonne XX

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Francine

Sun 10th Mar 2013 17:28

Torpid Tiger huh?
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M.C. Newberry

Sun 10th Mar 2013 16:14

Thanks for the comment about "Paper Chase". I used to buy the broadsheets, then none at all, followed by the occasional purchase of the D.E. - with its free TV magazine on Saturday (and its campaign agin' an overbearing EU). The London Evening Standard is now FREE here in town - so that makes up most of my current newspaper reading these days. I was telling Yvonne B. that I once had a letter published in The Times (THOSE were the glory days!) challenging noted pundit and author Bernard Levin about his use of the term "agent provocateur". Nowadays, it's more likely to be a moan printed in a local "freebie" letter page!!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 10th Mar 2013 16:03

I've just been listening to your two songs. Delightful, especially "Kushagarnie" which has a timeless feel to it. Both are most appealingly sung. You are obviously a gifted lady with much to offer. Well done, you! I enjoy folk - The Watersons/Martin Carthy and the Fishermen's Friends...to mention some; and,of course, Country from the USA. They go to the heart of what it is to be human - with all its trials, tribulations and happiness.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 10th Mar 2013 15:46

Hi Yvonne - thanks for taking the trouble to
comment on "Paper Chase". I understand your
liking for the Daily Telegraph...a sane and
sensible "read" for those seeking one step up
in the search for information. I once had the
satisfaction of having a letter published in
The Times, challenging noted columnist and
broadcaster Bernard Levin about his use of the
term "agent provocateur". Those were the days!

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Steve Higgins

Sun 10th Mar 2013 00:16

Thanks for taking a moment to read 'The Long and Dusty Road' MC. I worked on this for a long time and my breakthrough moment was verse 5 so I then went back and re worked things in that style hence the structure. Think I've done my usual trick and posted the poem before I've done meddling with it . .

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Yvonne Brunton

Sat 9th Mar 2013 23:11

Oh John, you can put a shilling in my slot any day.XX

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 9th Mar 2013 16:24

I look forward to your work shared on WOL. That's a very impressive profile.

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Andy N

Sat 9th Mar 2013 12:36

sounds interesting over the blue cat guys.. keep us informed

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 8th Mar 2013 23:28

Thanks John
it's actually a Rondeau - based upon the concept that the sun doesn't actually rise - the earth tilts :-) good old Copernicus eh?
Ian

PS - sorry - posted this on the blog first - forgot it doesn't go to you direct - what a numpty :-(

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:39

Hello Yvonne,
Glad you liked "WonderBale".
The Gallaghers based their version on mine, you know.

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:37

Hello Steve,
Glad you liked "WonderBale". He certainly on fire at the moment.

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:34

Hello MC,
Glad you liked "WonderBale" The boy's certainly mustard at the moment!

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Mar 2013 22:33

Hello Harry,
Many thanks for your thoughts on "WonderBale".
I'm afraid I agree that 4th spot is a bit remote now for either Liverpool or Everton. It seems a 3-way fight for 3rd and 4th between us, Arsenal and Chelsea.

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Steve Higgins

Fri 8th Mar 2013 20:14

The Dusty road of life needs some more work yet Yvonne but thanks for reading. Best wishes, Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 8th Mar 2013 20:11

Hi Allison. lots for taking a moment to read 'the long and dusty road' Got stuck on this for a long time but my breakthrough moment was the verse you mentioned :
'I’ll breathe my last in a side road, a by road
An end of the line quiet road'
Still not completely happy with this but thanks for your comments,
Best wishes, Steve

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Isobel

Thu 7th Mar 2013 19:36

That's spooky - I was just going in to leave a comment on your profile when it disappeared!

I was going to say that the Tudor isn't about any one person - no venue is. There are a number of regulars who make it cosy and it manages to attract new people. I think the stage and sound system help - it really has a professional set up but with an intimate feel to it.

I'm sorry that you've taken yourself off but understand. On line sites aren't everyone's thing. Still hope to see you at the Tudor though!

And I like the idea of being a tiger! LOL xx

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Katy Megan Hughes

Thu 7th Mar 2013 16:21

Sure does!!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 7th Mar 2013 16:18

"Fridge Full Of Muddy Water"? Priceless!
On the subject of things found in canals...have you ever thought of one about a serial killer?
Call it "Johnny, dismember me"!

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 7th Mar 2013 15:01

John
just seen your latest blog - which prompted me to go back a few and read some of he earlier ones. have to say that I really like your style and prose - a good mix of heady topics covered in a thought provoking way. Being a newbie I'm still finding my way and tend only to check back on earlier work if i really like a blog posting - so BIG thumbs up for 'the daily mail....' and a great back catologue to boot.
Cheers
Ian

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darren thomas

Wed 6th Mar 2013 20:32

Hi Rachel - thanks for your recent comments.

I'm enjoying your narratives. Always unpredictable. Always fascinating.

dt

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David Cooke

Wed 6th Mar 2013 18:56

Hi Greg Glad you liked my trees, or I suppose they're still Hockney's! Looking forward to meeting up at Jan & Donall's gig. Should be a good night.

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Hazel

Tue 5th Mar 2013 23:35

Thanks for the comment on Sexy at Sixty Dave..

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Pros&Coms

Tue 5th Mar 2013 17:16

thank you

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Nigel Astell

Tue 5th Mar 2013 15:31

The Blue Cat would be a purrrrfect choice for such an event hope it opens soon.

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Ali Taha Alnobani

Tue 5th Mar 2013 11:48

I express my respect to Write Out Loud

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George Harris

Tue 5th Mar 2013 11:11

Thank you very much, we very much loved being part of the event.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 5th Mar 2013 11:04

David Andrew and I enjoyed your pieces at More Poetry last night. More, please!

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John F Keane

Mon 4th Mar 2013 19:28

I am going to do such a book anyway, but we would need to sell an awful lot of them! The Blue Cat in Heaton Moor may be doing poetry events when it reopens. Of course, it would be a bit of a trek for most people and an 'open' venue.

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Martin Bailey

Mon 4th Mar 2013 10:18

Its a bike rack haha. I think it was in Settle on a camping trip.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 4th Mar 2013 10:10

Just an idea for finding funds for the Art Gallery.

What does everyone think of putting all our collage poems together in a book which John wants to do but the money go to keep our club going on a Monday night - - - just a thought.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Mon 4th Mar 2013 10:10

Thanks Martin.

Is that a bike rack or a zimmer frame supporting you. It looks a nice place where ever you are

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Katy Megan Hughes

Mon 4th Mar 2013 08:00

hi Dave

Thank you for your comments - will look at re-drafting that line too!

Katy

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Francine

Mon 4th Mar 2013 04:00

I have to agree - awesome photo!
And whoever took it is ace ; )

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 3rd Mar 2013 17:56

Hi Dan - love your work. Hope you are enjoying the site!

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 3rd Mar 2013 17:42

Hi Graham - a very warm welcome to WOL. I enjoyed the wonderful density of the imagery in these poems. It would be lovely to see some posted in the blogs section - poems there seem to get read by more people, and hopefully appreciated too.

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 3rd Mar 2013 10:56

Dave
many thanks for your kind comments regarding ' A Step Towards Winter' - much appreciated
cheers
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 3rd Mar 2013 10:55

Hi Harry
many thanks for your kind comments on 'Step Towards Winter' - it means a lot when other poets recognise the intricacies of structured verse. I really appreciate your comments.
Cheers
Ian

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 1st Mar 2013 23:33

Well we poets don't have to be shrinking violets do we? And we can tag our material.

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Graham Ramsden

Fri 1st Mar 2013 17:37

Thanks Greg I have always tried to include the natural world in my work.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 1st Mar 2013 16:10

Just wanted to say how much I like these two beautifully-observed poems, Graham. Your experience as a former countryside officer, I guess. You don't waste your words; your language is very exact. I like that.

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Katy Megan Hughes

Fri 1st Mar 2013 12:49

Thank you for your comment! I was really wary about posting it! : )

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darren thomas

Fri 1st Mar 2013 12:00

Thanks for your recent comments Laura. Your profile pic is ace. [:^[-)

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Yvonne Brunton

Thu 28th Feb 2013 22:18

Just as long as there is some lead in your pencil, Johnny boy!

What's this about my disappearing from WOL ? That's the second time that's happened recently.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Feb 2013 21:54

Ah, there you are, Bonny.
I'd not been able to get at you for a couple of weeks.
Many thanks for your kind comments on "Frowns of Silence".
What I want to know is this: what were we boys doing at school when they taught you girls such classics as "If you don't know, I'm not telling you." and "Just imagine; when we're married we can do this every night".
Woodwork, I expect.
Who would want to learn such deadly lifeskills when you could be making a pencil case instead?

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Fkx

Thu 28th Feb 2013 21:48

Thank you kindly for your much welcome comment on my poem.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Feb 2013 21:47

Hello MC,
Glad you liked my rip-off of a Simon and Garfunkel classic. I once heard someone do, "Fridge Full of Muddy Water" about a canal walk.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Feb 2013 21:44

Hello Dave.
Glad you liked "Frowns of Silence".
Where do women hear the phrase. "If you don't know I'm not telling you"?

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Feb 2013 21:43

Now then, harry.
many thanks for your advice on "Frowns of Silence". I take it you've endured more than your fair share of Coventry!

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