Good for You

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Good for you,
    found your flow.
Good for you,
    got that healthy glow.
Good for you,
    navigating storms like a willow.
Good for you,
    used your pain as fuel to grow.
Good for you,
    no more living on tiptoe.
Good for you,
    no longer afraid of the scarecrow.
Good for you,
    escaped the tornado.
Good for you,
    found your rainbow.
Good for you,
    taking time to say hello.
Good for you,
    doing just fine solo.
Good for you,
    thriving dynamo.
Good for you,
    no longer an average Joe.
Good for you
    made it out of Tupelo.
Good for you,
    going wherever the wind may blow.
Good for you,
    star of the show.
Good for you,
    praising above instead of hitting below.
Good for you,
    inspiring others everywhere you go.
Good for you,
    planting seeds today for a brighter tomorrow.
Good for you,
    spreading love presto.
Good for you,
    enlightened child of indigo.
Good for you,
    contrasting darkness with light like a VanGogh.
Good for you,
    teaching us that we're stronger than we know.

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Vautaw

Mon 5th Aug 2019 00:15

Good one Adam! Thank you so much for stopping by to read my poetry and leaving feedback. This was a fun one to write. I love when it flows from my brain/soul to the page!

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Adam Rabinowitz

Sat 3rd Aug 2019 09:24

I'm surprised no on else said it but here it is, Good for you.

I enjoyed the call and response quality.

<Deleted User> (19708)

Fri 21st Jun 2019 22:05

Brilliant!

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Vautaw

Mon 27th May 2019 01:05

Thank you all so much for reading and your wonderful comments. ? I had fun creating this rhyme❣️

<Deleted User> (21818)

Mon 27th May 2019 00:45

Vautaw, this is absolutely wonderful. Inspirational on so many levels. I not only love it, I need to read it everyday and I will! Thank you!?

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Don Matthews

Sun 26th May 2019 23:56

Like this one Vautaw. Powerful message and nice rhythm.

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Mae Foreman

Sun 26th May 2019 22:38

Great one Vautau! The visual flow of it resembles the flow of Van Gogh's brushstrokes don't they? Excellent!
Thank you for this ?
Mae

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 26th May 2019 22:31

Really, really like this Vautaw, it has a lovely off beat scansion, which underlines a powerful rhythmic message.

J. x

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