plastic protection

your toothy grin
is only cotton
trying to blow down this brick
house I have crafted

you were included in the blueprint
until I started changing 
the locks 
and now you're waiting for
an open door

anxietybrokendepressionhopeless romanticlovesad

◄ Nerves

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Laura Taylor

Tue 24th Apr 2018 12:17

Oh I do like this. Ambiguous and pithy as you like.

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Douglas MacGowan

Mon 23rd Apr 2018 21:29

it sounds like a relationship in transition, or one coming out of a transition. I like the cotton image.

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