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BRIGHT LOVE

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I'm like sunshine...

I will bring warmth and light

to your world.

Grab my beams and I will burn you!

You can't own me

but I will be a good mate

if allowed to walk with you

not dragged by you.

Enjoy me and I will enjoy you

then life will shine on both of us.

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lynn hahn

Mon 6th Feb 2017 16:59

Thanks all. Appreciate the like thinking.

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AM Cash

Mon 6th Feb 2017 05:54

Love the positive message!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 5th Feb 2017 17:38

Another enjoyable example of optimism soldered to reality.
"Give and take,
Take and give,
That's the only way to live!"

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Randall Eckstein

Sun 5th Feb 2017 14:17

A lovely message. I especially like the sunshine metaphor - grab my beams and I will burn you. ?

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John Coopey

Sun 5th Feb 2017 13:50

It's a very nice invitation, Lynn (I get offers like this all the time) but I'm afraid I'm taken.

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Hazel ettridge

Sun 5th Feb 2017 07:26

I'm with you there, Lynn.

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