These memories fade into me
Each time I gather
They become seamless
They've woven themselves into the stars
Beauty as they are
It is my past
To the melody of my soul
I caught them dancing
As if they didn't mind the memories that cried
They thought them loveliness
Please watch for when they fall
That is you or I falling to harmonize
So we become awoken
To be shown
Just like the stars above
awareness Awoken beauty forgiving love past the
very raw here jolene. totally agree with cynthia here but i did really enjoy it.
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Mon 25th Aug 2014 17:19
all we need to say is-nice poem!xx
There is a very haunting quality here in the essence of your ideas.
But, honestly, IMO, if you feel you have not quite captured your intended meaning, I think you should put such work in a personal diary and hone it until you are better satisfied. Let it come into focus. Mess with it. Ultimately, you shouldn't have to offer an explanation to qualify your vision.
And welcome to WOL. You will really like it on this site.
Jolene, beautiful metaphor of your memories woven into stars :) I'd love to hear more about the line "That is you or I falling to harmonize" and the very last stanza.
I wrote this kind of fast, it honestly was a whole different poem at first but it got erased so i wrote this instead. If you wish to know the meaning just leave a comment below. I feel as though I may not have written enough to convey my message.
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Jolene Penashue
Tue 2nd Sep 2014 04:48
To Candice: It is about finding ourselves and being truly happy with who we are.