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The Visitor

 

The sinful taste of poisoned lips

I'm drunk on him, immerse me

Deserving of his fingertips

Explore me, show no mercy.

 

Lustful urges, all consuming

In blackness, I await him

The need is overpowering

Will I sink or will I swim?

 

In midnight light, he comes to me

With wanton hands he captures

Undresses me with savage glee 

Each touch he breaks and fractures.

 

My body bruised i've had my fix

Release is mine to savour

Discharge him now I've had my kicks

My fantasy, my saviour. 


 

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Ged the Poet

Tue 5th Aug 2014 11:56

Wow... just read this.
I agree with Phil. Very hot in every sense.

'Release is mine to savour
Discharge him now I've had my kicks
My fantasy, my saviour'.

Superb!

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 3rd Aug 2014 20:25

all power corrupts and non more so than the power of ...well, you get my drift... Tommy

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 3rd Aug 2014 19:53

I'm reading this work now- reading you as I read.
:)

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 3rd Aug 2014 13:01

Powerful stuff. D.H. Lawrence would surely
have approved!

Michelle J L Cooper

Fri 1st Aug 2014 17:16

Love that poem very powerful :)

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Nigel Astell

Fri 1st Aug 2014 16:11

To execute overpowering
sinful forbidden lust
fixed then discharged
stimulates them both
writer and reader.

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