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Old Age

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Pepped up with pills and various potions

 

Zimmer frame ready to help forward motion

 

Wired for sound and to aid dicky ticker

 

Capsules to slow it - or make it go quicker

 

Now where's my bifocals to help me to see

 

- and all this just so I can go for a wee.

 

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◄ Citizen's Lament

The Ballad Of The Artful Dodger ►

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Steve Higgins

Fri 21st Jun 2013 14:16

Comical and serious at the same time. Excellent work - Best wishes, steve

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 22nd May 2013 02:46

A pleasure to skip through - and slyly potent too.

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Lynn Dye

Mon 20th May 2013 14:41

Good one, Yvonne, enjoyed. x

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 20th May 2013 14:13

Hmmm. I'll leave it at that!

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 19th May 2013 14:22


Yvonne,
I know this one`s about me, but It`s no use postin` these little praise-poem tributes up to try and get round me.

I still don`t forgive you for preferrin` that young guitar - playin` troubador.

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Isobel

Sun 19th May 2013 09:16

Yes - because the reason you went may not be there by the time you get there :)

Nice springy rhythm!

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John Coopey

Sat 18th May 2013 23:57

All you've got to. Do now, yvonne, is to remember what you went into the bathroom for.

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