Cosy bed comforts…
body lies weary…
eyelids heavy…
brain in overdrive…
And so I ask –
Is your flirting going anywhere?
does it mean anything?
or shall I just drift off
and dream of what could have been…
I open one eye,
two-fifteen!
through the gloom
digital shines red.
I turn over,
pull sheet over head,
close my eyes,
your face is all I see…
So please tell me –
Is your flirting going anywhere?
does it mean anything?
as I would so much prefer
to dream in hope of what might be…
Hi Stef - evicted Colin, you say?
Well, no, but this poem does nothing for his self esteem!!!
And how did you know about my ears??
Lol,
L xx
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments. xx
Yes - I would agree with the other comments made here - this is the kind of stuff to give you sleepless nights. I think your poem is very well executed. x
This is a lovely and softly erotic vignette Lynn. :)
Regards,
A.E.
<Deleted User> (6895)
Tue 13th Dec 2011 16:59
Are we to take it
that you have evicted Colin then Lynn?
haha!
And yes we agree with Steve on the poem.
Well done!
cheers big ears.
P&S.xx
Like this Lynn, these questions are the cause of millions of sleepless nights across the world! good stuff Jeff x
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Andy N
Sun 18th Dec 2011 21:06
i agree with jeff here totally, Lynne.
nice stuff.. made me smile on these cold winter nights - lol