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心折れ Kokoro Ore*

The pulse once strong now beats so frail,
Beneath the chest, a hollow tale.
Where laughter lived, the silence stays,
A weight descends and clouds all days.

The eyes that sought a guiding flame,
Now find the void, no warmth to claim.
Each breath a shard, each beat a thief,
That drags the soul through endless grief.

The world moves on, yet joy has fled,
The sky turns grey, the heart feels dead.
The mind recalls the vanished one,
And shivers deep where tears have run.

No dawn revives, no cure can heal,
The chest surrenders to the seal.
A body waits for final breath,
Where love’s departure marks its death.

* kokoro ore = Japanese for "broken heart"
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Rolph David

Wed 10th Sep 2025 17:57

Dear Uilleam,
I really like the way you phrased that thought. Perhaps “broken heart” has always been our poetic shorthand for something more elusive – a fracture of the mind, or maybe even of the spirit. The heart is where we locate feeling in our language, but the mind is where the weight of loss truly settles. Maybe the two can’t really be separated: when the heart falters, the mind bends; when the mind suffers, the heart aches. Your reflection opens a space between metaphor and reality, and that’s exactly where poetry seems to live.

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Rolph David

Tue 2nd Sep 2025 08:20

Thank you so much, Chloe and Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh, for your thoughtful comments on my poem. I truly appreciate your kind words and reflections—they are very meaningful to me.

Thanks also to the following people for liking my poem:
C. (Chloe)
Yanma Hidayah
My Traumarketplace (formerly Nest, Auracle, Kevin T.S. Tan)
Holden Moncrieff
Aisha Suleman
Stephen Gospage
Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh
hugh
Graham Sherwood

Your support and encouragement are deeply appreciated!
Regards,
Rolph

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Chloe To

Sat 30th Aug 2025 14:12

The emotions are very raw and they are described in a way that touches one's heart.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 30th Aug 2025 11:47

You capture the sadness well, Rolph.

I'm no expert, but find it interesting that we use the term "broken heart", to describe a more intangible "broken mind"?

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