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The Primrose

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The primrose with its glowing face held high

Brings promise of the softer days of Spring

And gazes up towards the wind ripped sky

Through branches to the sunlight, filtering

New leaves unfold beneath the solemn frost

Where clasped they lie and frozen to the earth

A voice like yours is permanent, not lost

The primrose glows to celebrate your birth

And now each year it brings us back to you

Sun flows through every open facing bloom

To shine upon the flowers that you grew

In gardens where you gave them love and room

Smile gently as you watch us from  above

The primrose is your messenger of love

 

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◄ Floating out on Windermere

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R A Porter

Sun 10th Mar 2024 10:26

Thanks John, it was my mum’s favourite too - partly because my Dad was colour blind & could only see yellow and blue - I keep trying to establish a bank of them, but it’s not so easy. They grow best in the wild I think!

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John Coopey

Sun 10th Mar 2024 10:10

Lovely sonnet, RAP. Enjoy the contrasting descriptions of Spring - sunlight, regeneration “wind ripped sky”. And of course my favourite garden flower (well, it’s cultivar at least!)

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