'Hands that can rest, now, relieved of a century's weight': poet laureate’s tribute to Queen Elizabeth
Poet Laureate Simon Armitage has written a poem to mark the death of Queen Elizabeth II. Floral Tribute is written through the metaphor of the lily of the valley, one of the late Queen's favourite flowers, which she had in her coronation bouquet. He told BBC Radio 4’s Today programme he tried to be "personal and write a poem of condolence but without being intrusive". The two verses describe the coming of a September evening and the appearance of a lily as "a token of thanks": "A promise made and kept for life - that was your gift". It’s a double acrostic, each line’s first letter spelling "Elizabeth" when taken together.
Explaining his decision, Armitage said: "It's a lovely name but a name she probably rarely got to hear very much because everybody had to preface that with ceremonial nominals." He described the poem as an opportunity to do something "outside of the language and commentaries we've already heard".
by Simon Armitage
Evening will come, however determined the late afternoon,
Limes and oaks in their last green flush, pearled in September mist.
I have conjured a lily to light these hours, a token of thanks,
Zones and auras of soft glare framing the brilliant globes.
A promise made and kept for life - that was your gift -
Because of which, here is a gift in return, glovewort to some,
Each shining bonnet guarded by stern lance-like leaves.
The country loaded its whole self into your slender hands,
Hands that can rest, now, relieved of a century's weight.
Evening has come. Rain on the black lochs and dark Munros.
Lily of the Valley, a namesake almost, a favourite flower
Interlaced with your famous bouquets, the restrained
Zeal and forceful grace of its lanterns, each inflorescence
A silent bell disguising a singular voice. A blurred new day
Breaks uncrowned on remote peaks and public parks, and
Everything turns on these luminous petals and deep roots,
This lily that thrives between spire and tree, whose brightness
Holds and glows beyond the life and border of its bloom.
Write Out Loud poets were even quicker off the mark in expressing their feelings about the death of Queen Elizabeth II at the age of 96 at Balmoral on Thursday afternoon, with many using Write Out Loud as their forum.
Stephen Atkinson's poem, using the same floral theme 'Our Lily' begins: "Our lily of the valley ..." and later observes: "Elizabethans, is all we've ever been". His poem was read out by his MP, Paul Howell, on Saturday in the House of Commons.
Julie Callaghan, in a poem titled ‘RIP Her Majesty The Queen', said: “I can’t find the right words just now / to say how this news makes me feel / I think it will take time to sink in / and to believe that it is real.” Another poet, Russell Jacklin, in a three-line poem titled simply ‘Goodbye’, said: “No words, / No thoughts, / Just tears
Another poem posted on Write Out Loud has also made waves. Philippa Atkin, whose pandemic poem 'In the Time of Quiet', went viral in 2020, said she had received a similar global reaction to her tribute to the Queen, 'For Elizabeth'.
A poem by Stephen Gospage, 1966, focuses on England captain Bobby Moore wiping his hands in "unrehearsed respect" before shaking hands with the Queen and receiving the World Cup from her. Meanwhile Graham Sherwood posted a poem titled ‘Changing the Guard’ which ends with these lines: “There is change in the air / old becomes new / there is news abroad / and we understand / with not a word spoken.”
After the first rush of emotion, inevitably there were poets that expressed other views, sceptical of royal privilege (Steve White), and noting “feudal relations in the twenty-first century” and media reaction to the news (John Marks).
The Poetry Society commissioned a poem from its president, Roger McGough. The first stanza of 'God Rest The Queen' reads: "She spoke volumes quietly. / Is everywhere and will remain so / Our shared interest, our common currency / The nation cannot let her go."