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CONDENSEDPOEM

 

Therewasapoetman
whowroteandwrote
untilhewasoutofpaper
soheinventedthiswayofwriting
thatsavesspaceandsavespaper
youtoocandoiteasily
condenseyourthoughts
condenseyourwords
nooffense
butjustahint
itmakessense
tocondense.

 

 

 

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 15th May 2021 10:18

Whenwritingwithoutgapshasbeenmadeintolaw
Andnewspapersandbookscannotdoitanymore
Yourpoemwillhavebeentheonethatbeganit
Notjustsavinginkandpaperbutalsotheplanet

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Hugh

Sat 15th May 2021 07:25

Welldonetoreadthiswasgoodfun,
Lessfingertaptoleavenogap.
Anewcodeofpracticeyouhavestarted,
Fromleavingagapwehavenowdeparted.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 13th May 2021 20:27

MegrandadlovedcondensedmilkMmmm

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 13th May 2021 15:45

On this subject - pray see(?)
This thought comes to me:
I prefer to make sense
To being seen to be dense.

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Ghazala lari

Thu 13th May 2021 14:20

Wellwrittenpieceimustsay.

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Ghazala lari

Thu 13th May 2021 14:20

Digital files are better place to document your works. Nocondensingrequiredhere.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 13th May 2021 13:44

Wise words. Condensing is good.

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