Chicken Licken

     Everything is going wrong.
     Or everything went so wrong
     I can't tell
     If it stopped and I didn't notice,
     And I can't tell
     The problem.

Everything is just nothing now.
Or everything was so much nothing,
I can't see
That there's any difference now,
And I can't see

               Everything is tumbling down,
               Or everything is built up past proportion.
               I can't decide
               If it's hitting me, or the other way around,
               And I can't decide

Everything ended,
Or everything started going wrong,
    I didn't notice which.
Hurry, Hurry...   The sky is falling down.
               Hide quick!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 12th May 2021 21:57

Thanks for commenting Stephen 💕
You get an invite to the secret den.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 11th May 2021 17:28

This has a great (bad) dream-like quality. I can't decide if it's hitting me or the other way round..I know that feeling, from somewhere.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 11th May 2021 16:30

Thank you Ghazala and Nigel for commenting 💕

Nigel, it is where secret dens usually are! I'll open up a pack of biscuits and eat some until you get here! Ghazala you can come too!
And anyone else who leaves a comment on this poem 😂

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem 💐

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Nigel Astell

Tue 11th May 2021 14:29

Where is your secret den? I will come and join you.

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Ghazala lari

Tue 11th May 2021 13:03

Everything will work out well
After each night the morning dwells
Anxious write💕 well worded.

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