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Underground Part 13 to 15

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** NB. Three more haiku about the Underground.

 (More to come too) **

 

 

Underground XIII

You smile after he 
Hides his wedding ring then slips 
getting off the train

Underground XIV

September darkness
Makes the late running train feel
even much later  

Underground XV

He doesn’t wake him up
until he has missed his stop 
smiling silently

haikuhaikus

◄ Underground (Part 7 to 12)

Consequences Part 5 and 6 ►

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Andy N

Thu 10th Sep 2020 22:46

Thanks Martin and Nigel - am enjoying writing these, much admit (:

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Martin Elder

Thu 10th Sep 2020 08:41

Very nice Andy

love them

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Nigel Astell

Thu 10th Sep 2020 00:34

Ginger hair smart jacket
skinny legs lets his fingers run
silk black tights ruined.

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