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Trapped

Once I saw a dream
Of living in an open air
Full of freedom with colorful layer.
Having a sight to achieve a height
There comes a lover of a face with smile.
Never said, never asked a question
Simple sight made all the decisions.
Believing the person, giving up everything,
My life was trapped like anything.

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trappedcagedreamfreedomsly persontrustdistrustlifegoal

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A battle with self. ►

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Bhavesh

Wed 8th Jul 2020 09:02

Keith, thank you for your kind words?.

Bhavesh

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keith jeffries

Tue 7th Jul 2020 23:13

Beautifully crafted with such powerful emotion.

Thank you for this

Keith

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