Lucid Dreams

I want to sleep, so I can dream. 

Dreaming makes the pain go away,

weakens my prison walls,

so you can rescue me. 

 

I feel your warm breath on my face,

your loving embrace... 

 

Hand-in-hand we run through the lush,

exotic island. 

 

Our laughter echoes among the trees

as we look towards the horizon and

see eternity... 

 

Dawn beckons me.

I don’t want to wake.

 

I want to dance with you, forever 

in my lucid dreams.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 8th Dec 2020 21:19

Thank you Xoanxo for the beautiful quote and comment. I’m so glad you are back on WOL. ❤️

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Xoanxo

Tue 8th Dec 2020 16:39

"What is life? An illusion, a shadow, a story, And the greatest good is little enough: for all life is a dream, and dreams themselves are only dreams" Pedro Calderón de la Barca (1600-1681)...

But to fully wake up to a new dawn...Oh, the sheer beauty of it!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 20th Mar 2020 22:38

I wholeheartedly agree Po. Thank you for inspiring this poem with your beautiful poem, “Dying for Your Touch”... I love the way poetry keeps on giving!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 20th Mar 2020 16:11

Thanks so much for reading and your feedback Keith, Don & Tom. The words come to me elusive as butterflies in a field of dreams!

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Tom

Fri 20th Mar 2020 13:00

I love the feeling and atmosphere created here. Each line flows so nicely into the next.

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Don Matthews

Fri 20th Mar 2020 08:27

Take this in the light-hearted way it is meant V. A couple of glasses of white - guaranteed zonk-out. Trouble is I can't dial up the dream I want. I'm sure whoever's in charge of dreams that night says he's been a nice boy today, we'll send him the dream fairies (in diaphanous gowns), if they think I've misbehaved? I won't tell you what they send......

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keith jeffries

Fri 20th Mar 2020 06:14

written with passion. Loved every word.

Keith

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 20th Mar 2020 03:15

If we must wake, let it be to another dream filled with poetry, art, music... Any one will do, preferably all three! Thanks for stopping by Do. ? I hope you have a dreamy day! ❤️

Do.RoThy

Fri 20th Mar 2020 02:30

Waking up is so beautiful with these enchantingly dreamy words n music to enhance the taste of lovely feelings within?

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