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afishamongmany

Wed 22nd May 2019 10:10

Jason though you might enjoy this -

Said Zebedi nonchalantly sipping his tea Rhyme can be sublime but sometime a chime a chant a twisting slant that ignores you can't can be the plant that bears the rarest fragrantest flower that rears the shining climbing tower that awakens sleeping weeping cowards to see and say hooray hooray today came some really cool communication surprising inspiration such a sweet and strange sensation and please let's not forget in the creative sweat every asset by which the poet is beset alliteration personification metronomic syncopation and oh yes punctuation said Zebedi pouring yet another mug of best builders tea.
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afishamongmany

Wed 22nd May 2019 10:07

Hi Jason - Really glad you enjoyed. Good poetry doesn't -have to - rhyme - but - it always has been and always will be a - major - possible component of - good poetry.
Go well ><>

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 21st May 2019 21:30

Really love that bio, as a commited rhymer I truly enjoy a poem with meaning but it's even better when it's really enjoyable to say as well.

J.πŸ˜€

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d.knape

Tue 21st May 2019 18:46

I guess I'd better
learn to adapt
my worn out body
thoroughly sapped
still there is more
in me than that
my mind ain't gone
there's more to tap!

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d.knape

Tue 21st May 2019 18:40

I took the word Old
out of my dictionary
now there are no words left

πŸ˜ƒ wink.

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Hallie Elle

Tue 21st May 2019 16:55

Reading through your words has me breaking and relating, pretty f*cking hard.

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Martin Elder

Tue 21st May 2019 08:52

Hi John
Glad I found your sample poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Cheers
Martin

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John Marks

Mon 20th May 2019 23:14

Very late to the party I know Steve but 13th floor was N.O.T. a bore.. Well-penned.

John

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d.knape

Mon 20th May 2019 22:02


gotta love dogs.
they are like people,
only better.

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d.knape

Mon 20th May 2019 21:53

thanks Don.
always appreciate your responses.
πŸ˜ƒ

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Vautaw

Mon 20th May 2019 17:52

Thanks for stopping by my page, reading a few and commenting Philip. I'm enjoying your poetry too! πŸ’–

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Martin Peacock

Sun 19th May 2019 08:45

I'm a fan of rhyme and tight structure myself, Jason. It's always a pleasure to read someone who takes as much time over, and has the same passion for, language as I do. This poem works for me.

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Jane Briganti

Sun 19th May 2019 01:16

Thank you Rose for reading and commenting on "Planet Earth"😊

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Vautaw

Sat 18th May 2019 18:38

Welcome Miyurangi! I’m an introvert too and find WOL a welcoming place to share a piece of my soul. I hope you find a home here as well. Write on!

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Mae Foreman

Sat 18th May 2019 18:28

Necessity. Of course. And a sharp mind apparently. I shall cherish and vow to honor and abide by your wisdom, my lady!
Thank you🎈
Mae

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 18th May 2019 16:20

Necessity!

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Rose Casserley

Sat 18th May 2019 09:24

The question now is where are YOU Big Sal?






Rose πŸ’‹

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Mae Foreman

Fri 17th May 2019 19:45

Hi Cynthia! That sounds yummy! Actualluy when i said I liked to eat ice cream all year long I ment all year long during all FOUR years of my little affair with Mr. C ! I'd say be careful with the weight but in all honesty Cynthia those ice-creams got me out of bed into my clothes and out of the house so screw it. Do what makes you happy! When you finally make it to the finish line that's when you'll start building your life all over. If you have an extra pound or two, the hell with it, you'll lose them in no time and if not then there will be just more of you to love! No big deal!
If you are referring to my the one that says: "Art is the imaginary solution to a problem that is unsolvable in real life." then yes it is originally mine. It is what I discovered when I first started writing. I have many a short story written that have a matching cross to be born! I remember the first one, I wrote it in the middle of a sleepless night. I fell asleep as soon as I finished the last word!
Thanks for stopping by on my profile! Be strong! Get well! 🎈
Mae

P.S. Your Bio is astounding! How is it possible for one person to do ALL that??? Really, tell me your secret!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 17th May 2019 16:20

Mae, I was really interested in your desire/need for 'ice cream' for a whole year!

Right now, I love raisins, salted peanuts and chocolate pieces, all in one mouthful! It's the salt that binds it all together. I could just purr! I have to be 'sensible' or I'll put on weight! I gain weight FAST! (But not too sensible, in honesty.)

Thanks for responding. Your photos are lovely. Is that your original 'quote' at the end of your bio?

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Nigel Astell

Fri 17th May 2019 15:54

Outside looking in

Stranger no longer
friendship burns within.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Fri 17th May 2019 13:44

Many thanks Lisa for liking my poem 'Rudderless'


Patricia. x

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Wolfgar Miere

Fri 17th May 2019 12:59

Keep on keeping on TC..give us alternatives, make us think..

David.

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d.knape

Fri 17th May 2019 02:40

i hate to tell you this but
Ditz is completely imaginary
i don't really have a dog
it was just the rhyming
and the sound
that made this poem fun.

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d.knape

Thu 16th May 2019 18:56

A Ditz is basically
a stupid person,
a scatterbrain.
In this case
it applies to a Dog!

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Jane Briganti

Thu 16th May 2019 18:24

Thank you Keith for your comment on 'The Beach'. Your comments always brighten my day! Have a wonderful weekend😊😊

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Jane Briganti

Thu 16th May 2019 18:22

Hi Don..."social animals"Lol ....Keep those nurses laughing. Thanks for reading!😊😊

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Hayley Taylor

Thu 16th May 2019 16:32

Finally making progress with my manuscript, *if* it is accepted by a publishing firm, It will be surrounding mental health, as I feel passionately about expressing the battles we face and providing a voice to those who struggle.

Fingers crossed this ends up going well.

Even if not, I will never give up writing and aiming to become a voice for those in need! πŸ’•

Thank you to everyone who reads my work, those who comment with feedback, and those who express fondness in the terms of a "like". Being part of this community has helped me grow, develop confidence in my work, and aspire to get to this point where I am finally trying to finalise an Anthology/Pamphlet on mental health!

-Hayley Taylor

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Jane Briganti

Thu 16th May 2019 13:50

Hello. I really enjoyed reading your Bio. I thought that last stanza wrapped it up really well. Thank you for commenting on my poem 'The Beach'. I look forward to reading more from you. Thank you. Jane

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d.knape

Thu 16th May 2019 10:42

Electricity
won't give you sway
use muscle power
and whisk away!

wink.

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Philip Stevens

Thu 16th May 2019 01:46

Liking the word'ery of your poetry not just the understanding of but the twisted love and moral abyss.

I will read on and listen to

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Lisa C Bassignani

Wed 15th May 2019 23:25

You go Girl!
I've waited over 35 years to be doing this....DON'T STOP NOW

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 15th May 2019 19:48

Bah to so-called labour-saving devices. There is a UK TV advert
extolling the "advantage" of an electric whisk over a hand-held one,
neatly avoiding the cost and the likelihood of power breakdown and
inconvenience. And I bet I'm as old as - and probably older than - you, as I can even remember using a fork for the purpose of mixing
stuff.

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Mae Foreman

Wed 15th May 2019 19:34

Hey Jane! Thanks for stopping by at my profile! I like your work! Let's keep writing and reading! 🎈
Thank you🎈
Mae

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keith jeffries

Wed 15th May 2019 18:13

Post Script
Welcome to Write out Loud

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keith jeffries

Wed 15th May 2019 18:12

Miyurangi,

First I thank you for commenting on my poem "This Friday". Your poem "The Wait" although short has a special quality to it. You certainly possess the potential to produce more work. Poetry is the art of the subjective and behind every poet there lies hidden the philosopher. Poems range from being descriptive to those who espouse the voice of dissent. "The Wait¨ has a descriptive quality. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Regards
Keith

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d.knape

Wed 15th May 2019 12:10

i remember roll up windows
i remember Pearl Harbor
i remember the Alamo
at my age
fortunately
I still remember
who I am.

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d.knape

Wed 15th May 2019 12:08

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d.knape

Wed 15th May 2019 12:07


Roll up windows, ugh
i remember how nice it was to get push button windows
so you did not have to stretch all the way over to roll up the
passenger side or the rear windows in a rain
i remember all this because i am old
but I have not yet rolled up my mind.

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Jane Briganti

Wed 15th May 2019 03:11

Thank you for the lovely comment on 'A Second Heart'. Jane

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Jane Briganti

Wed 15th May 2019 02:57

Thanks for the generous comment on "A Second Heart" Always appreciated😊

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Jane Briganti

Wed 15th May 2019 02:37

Thank you for reading 'A Second Heart'😊
I like your sample...I totally agree. Well said!

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keith jeffries

Tue 14th May 2019 10:07

Good Morning,

I have only this morning discovered your profile and read some of your poetry which I enjoyed immensely. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Kind Regards
Keith

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afishamongmany

Mon 13th May 2019 20:21

Thanks again for your encouragement ><>

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afishamongmany

Mon 13th May 2019 20:11

Glad you enjoyed Home is ...? Thank you for the encouragement.><>

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d.knape

Mon 13th May 2019 18:23

thanks Jason.

I look forward to more flattery from you soon.

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d.knape

Mon 13th May 2019 18:12

thanks for you comment on "How Many Kisses",
my mother is deceased but she continues to
influence my daily life.
"what would mom say."

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d.knape

Mon 13th May 2019 18:10

thank you Mona for commenting on
"How Many Kisses"
my mother is now deceased
but her words and ways
live on in my memory.

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d.knape

Mon 13th May 2019 18:06

thanks for your kind words.
that being said, why are you shrinking into
your blue sweater?

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afishamongmany

Mon 13th May 2019 10:11

Hello Mae and Ankita - Thank you both. I'm still getting orientated as to comments/likes/notifications/etc so I may be 'missing' somethings I should be responding to. Cyberspace is such a mazing place.
Go well ><>

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 13th May 2019 00:04

If you mean the one where I quoted Michael Palin, he said it was one of his favourites, "the Limerick that doesn't work." It was always one of my favourites too.πŸ˜€

J.

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