Thanks Wayne. Good luck on WOL. John

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hahaha Wolf so begins the various recoveries: "let's start in straight talking mode".

Tommy 😃

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Good profile Pic Tommy...proper.

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Chloé, Jason - Thank you muchly for your kind comments and encouragement.

d.k. - Those info cakes sometimes ya must take but they're not so yummy, too many will give ya data dyspepsia, they'll upset ya and give ya tummy ache. 😃 ><>

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congratulations!!! for your book paradoxical vista. 💐

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Thank you so much Jason for being so kind to me.

Julia x

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Hi Sarah,

I'd love to expand this poem for a children's book but unfortunately I wouldn't know where to begin.

I do like writing narrative poems, some have an adult twist such as Boy what a Lady! and the Princess and the Frog (which needs a rewrite). I'm working on several storylines at the moment but it takes me a while to get them onto paper.

Thanks for your interest and if I did ever get a poem published I'd know where to come for an illustrator.

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hello Wayne
I'm just replying to your reply on the Christmas Turkey poem if you do decide to give it a try and need an illustrator
I would definitely be interested in doing some illustrations for you if you decide to make a children's book from this poem
have a think about it and get back to me
I think it would be a fabulous children's book
no harm in trying x😊

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Hi Sarah,

I've just seen your message

"have you ever thought of turning this into a children's book?
it would be wonderful to read with illustrations x Comment is about Wayne McLellan (poet profile)"

I'm still getting the hang of the WOL website- but I think it was in relation to my "Turkey in sheep's clothing" poem. I wouldn't know how to get started with an illustrated book . However I'm attempting to set up a Youtube channel and record my voiceover with pictures etc. Early days but hopefully I'll get there soon. Thanks for taking the time to comment on my profile x

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Thanks for your like Vautaw the poet with so many names is this the famous one I wonder?

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have you ever thought of turning this into a children's book?
it would be wonderful to read with illustrations x

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Dear Afish (Irish or Arabian?)
thanks for reading my poem.

It says this site uses cookies.
try some.
they are delicious.

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the line
about the ice chest and recliner
came to me at the end
an apt close to this funny poem
glad you liked it.

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Thanks W. for reading and appreciating the poem.....Bon Voyage on WOL❤

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Hey Devon! I've been browsing your work and really enjoy what I've read so far. "She Calls It Sorrow" is a great story and reminds me of some of the people I've crossed paths with in life. It would sound great spoken slam-style with jazz in the background. Looking forward to reading more from you. Take care --- J. Zane

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Thanks, Don, for commenting on my hacked haiku! I dig your work, man (including your haiku). Also, I found your Bio very relate-able (I have similar "extra help"). Looking forward to seeing more from you. Take it easy ---- J. Zane

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Hi Jason! Thanks for the comment on When night comes. Really liked the Haikus.

Jennifer

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Thanks J. Twin flames always attract and no matter where they are, God will get them together at the best hour.

I enjoyed reading your poems. Keep writing!!

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Hi Julia, I have to say I'm a bit blown away by your sample and first poem, "Room." I don't really know what to say, other than I've rarely been touched by written words in quite the same way.
Just excellent!
I don't think I've ever added anyone as a favourite from one poem before, brilliant, painful but brilliant.

J. x

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Ah Nigel....thank you for those lovely words and for making me feel so welcome.

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Danny,
All of our stories are to be continued...

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We are all still learning

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Thank You, Do.RoThY, for your kind words. I enjoy what I have read so far in your blogs. Inevitable reality sums many things up and reminds me to recognize and accept change (sometimes whether I like it or not!) and to realize it is just the "cycle of inevitability" as you state. It is not always easy to avoid stubbornness in these rapidly changing times. Also, I read your Bio and best of luck to you in finding your twin flame! ---J. Zane

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I like your sample poems....from the begining to end....its a satire, a fact bashing wordathelon....last stanza is awesome....keeping your sanity by excluding yourself from boisterous crowd...great write!! Two thumbsup!!

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Thank you, afishamongmany, for your kind and honest comment on my blog "Snob City". I have been enjoying myself as I browse your work and I especially enjoy the audio entries. Your voice is magnificent for vocal readings and it carries your stories well. Looking forward to reading and hearing more future work. Take care... J. Zane

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Someone Into You

Blue into girl
girl into poetry
poetry into searching
searching into liking
liking into someone
someone into you.

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Much enjoyed your use of the word 'tempered'. I do clearly remember 'tempered steel' and the 'well-tempered clavier'. My mother, in fact, used that word 'to temper' often. I had forgotten. I have used it myself, but not in recent years. And yet, it is one of the finest words I know. Almost a philosophy in itself.


'my' crutch, as opposed to 'a' crutch?

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Mae, you do make me smile. You're like an old fashioned tea kettle on the high boil.

When I was a young teacher, sharing a flat with a fellow teacher, I put our kettle on for teatime - and then forgot it - utterly. I think I was playing a favourite record, loudly, and probably dancing around with complete concentration. Spaced out!

It exploded! And the cloud that filled the apartment, plastered the ceiling and the windows, our books and our furniture, was just awful!

With such intense energy that you have, don't forget to turn down, or even off, sometimes. Don't explode.

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Hi Lisa, thanks for your comment on Don't Look Into Their Eyes. Much appreciated. Tx

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Hi Martin, thanks for your comment on Don't Look Into Their Eyes (and all the other ones too!). Much appreciated 😃 Tx

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Hi Jennifer, thanks for your comment on Don't Look Into Their Eyes. Much appreciated 😃 Tx

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yeah, can't believe people buy those $1000 + phones.

soon they will implant phones in your head.
(that way you won't lose it.)
hahaha

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I'm having fun Cynthia, taking the piss about me hiding behind the crutch of alcohol.

I'm having fun with all my photos.

David.

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Hi Martin, thank you so much for your kind words on 'Arrival'. I was asked by my sister to write a poem concerning immigrants/ immigration but given how things are so polarised at the moment, I have tried to be very careful in my framing. Granted, less so in the last stanza. 😂
Anywho, thanks again,
- Josh

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I hope to be there too, Martin. Stu Buck is the guest poet - and that will be a treat!

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What are you DOING with your photo!

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Omg ... you have the greatest bio I’ve seen so far ( It’s so creative and well put together ). Gives a tiny glimpse into who you are

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thanks Martin the Elder.
by the way,
is that your wife's sweater???

😉)

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Only got a couple of coppers Paul so you will have to spend another night in your cold dark cell!

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Hi Cynthia B.T. - Thanks for your kind words. And many thanks for the proof pick up. Feel free to flag up any you find. The little rascals, they're always popping up. 😃
Sorry to hear that you've been poorly. Health and strength to you.

d.k. - sad to say I'm still often 'all at sea'. 😃
Go well
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Same Again Please

Stockport poets followed right behind

the marching large black umbrella

The Nelson offered a wellcome hello

thin bearded man ran for his life

as the W O L takeover took place

a Monday night of cheer and laughter

well nothing much different happened then!

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never mind my last post
i see now you are male
and have lived in the ocean
many years.
when did you come to shore?

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Dear Afisha
thanks for your comment on
"Wireless World".
now...are you a man or woman
with a name like that
it's hard to tell.

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Your work is so good! Thanks for your response to 'Pink Dress'.

Do check that tiny typo in your bio 'its currents are cruel'. (just because you're so good!)

Now that I'm better, I'll try to catch up with more of your work. With much pleasure, I'm sure.

Cynthia

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Thanks again for the poem Nigel.
Much appreciated my friend
see you next week
Martin

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Thanks for the lovely comment on "A Game of Chess" and the continued support.😊

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Hello Marin. Thank you for taking the time to comment on A Click Away & The Road Less Travelled. It's always great to hear from you. I hope life is treating you well!😊

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Hi Martin! Thanks for liking "Meaning Lost" and for the encouragement! I love your samples especially "All our gods have abandoned us"! Colour me intrigued!
I have quite a lot of reading to do but from what I've seen I can tell that you are very good my friend!
Thank you 🎈
Mae

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On ordering a Mouse:

next time I purchase
I'll research its purpose!

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thanks Brian for your comment.
that photo is so YOU.
😃

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