Thankyou :) I wrote it after almost giving up writing

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I like your profile picture Jon....?

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D.knape! I'm honored! And may I say, that makes one hell of a haiku! Thank you!

wink back!

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I had never read your sample 'Chain Letter' fully until now. That is funny, to hold up someone else's hopes of a damn message, and then even better - to delete it. You are sly.?

I also have burning bushes in my ears and brimstone in my nose - but you can't see that part. . .

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overwhelmed
yet under
the influence.


wink.

Comment is about Mae Foreman (poet profile)

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I agree. Your fly seems to have an attitude problem, but don´t they all

Keith

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Crow
thought he saw
a Crowshaw-
his seeing flawed
no Crow
saw.


wink.

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Flies
with personality
end up dead
eventually!


wink.

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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cheers Sal - and thanks for the great review - I genuinely do write everything as poems first - and then take a big pile of paper into the studio and think 'what the fuck am I going to do with this'
Ian

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Good morning from the Emerald Isles Don thanks for the comments on We..have a great day..Taylor ?

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Good to see you going strong with the music, and keeping up the vibe!

I always thought that was great how you transitioned the poems over to song format.

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Thank you for reading We Hugh..always appreciated...Taylor ?

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Thank you for commenting on We Avishek....?

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Thank you for commenting on We Trevor much appreciated.. Taylor ?

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Thank you for your cement on We Jon..as always it is valued and appreciated... Thank you ?

Comment is about Jon Stainsby (poet profile)

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I do like My Voice Died Ariana ?

Comment is about Ariana Leon (poet profile)

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Hello everyone! I am gutted as cannot be at Marsden on Sunday - have suspected kidney stones!!! BUT - have a great day - Dorinda x

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Great way to make each line ironic and self-contradicting on your sample.? It adds to the readability.

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As a flock of geese with perky beaks we shall always be going for a giggle methinks!

Might be going up to Marsden Poetry Jam if I do might give the New Mills review a mention before doing one of the poems!

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Cheers Don, I'm hoping for a flurry of egg poems this time next year ?

Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)

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warm welcome Jezer and many thanks for your comment on-

' in the mad courtroom of my head'

enjoy your stay!




Rose ?

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wink wink wink wink wink wink wink

phew rest eye then

wink wink wink wink wink wink

some more

oops

now my wink
is on the blink.

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Thanks Nigel, it was such a great night I thought it deserved a write up... and I must be getting better at hiding the nerves because they were most definitely present. It's always good to have a friendly face smiling back at you whilst you read though - helps a lot, which is also why I love how our group turn up and support each other at events like this. We are part of a very special "gaggle" of poets. I'm sure Dorinda has a more appropriate collective name for us!

Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)

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Thank you Keith! I appreciate the comments and you reading my poems!

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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Thanks for reading my poems Hugh much appreciated..?

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Round Robin Review

Like a butterfly spreading its wings for the first time - - -

We create a place of trust empathy and support - - -

Thought you put together a fantastic night of poetry

When you on the mic there was not a hint of how you described yourself at all

Enjoyed reading

Nigel

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thanks for commenting on the blog about my new CD 'screaming blue murder' Mark - I appreciate it
Ian

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thanks for commenting on the blog about my new CD 'screaming blue murder' Hugh - glad you liked it
Ian

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Hello Keith and thank you i am glad you enjoyed my work i will post more of my work soon you can also google my name and my first book called love letters to you my new book will be out this week called this time it's personal thanks and i look forward to hearing back from you. your friend William Thompson

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Can they be so vicious?

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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Hello there DK - thanks for the comment on my page.
No - it's not me on the bench - a snap by me taken in
Dartmouth, Devon, overlooking the River Dart towards its
estuary. This was the jumping-off spot for many US armed
forces' vessels employed in the D-Day Landings 1944...on
Utah Beach. Now it is a very popular holiday spot - but
you can also probably imagine how busy it was then!
Cheers,
MC

Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)

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Women go to restrooms
to talk about Men.
They used to love us
now they plot revenge.


wink.

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

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dear master of ceremonies
i like your "arrest room". funny.

is that YOU on the park bench?

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Hello William,

I enjoyed reading the words you wrote in your sample as they are spoken from the heart, that storehouse where all poetry comes from. Keep writing and let´s see some more of your wrork..
Keith

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Thanks for reading Sat Here Thinking Eric?

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Your comments and you reading are appreciated Keith.

Neruda is a damn legend.
?

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Thank you for reading Innocence Sold Jennifer..?

Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)

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Very unique sample.?

Comment is about Fred Dutch (poet profile)

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Thank you Trevor..I really appreciated your comment on Innocent Sold..we live in a society which brushes so much under the carpet. The reality shows do not help. Some want to live in a bubble of ignorance.. If we don't say it, it isn't happening. We can all marry a celebrity. Unfortunately most young peoples reality in these difficult times is a far cry from that....sorry Trevor I can't help recalling my own youth where jobs were plentiful, no zero hour contracts, and a future was more than a forlorn hope..?

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Hi Martin, Thank you for commenting on The Boy Who was a Funiosity. I love that word too, I often call it one of my little grandsons. Therein lies the inspiration. ?

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Thank you for reading I am a winner Hugh it means a lot. Taylor..?

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Thank you for your thought

Comment is about Jenny jeong (poet profile)

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Powerful sample. First stanza shone bright.?

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you mae? or may not.

thanks for visiting my site.
you have a strange way of putting things.
I do not understand it but it sounds poetic-
therefore you Mae be a success.
Mae the gods be with you.

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synaptic subroutine?
what the heck is that?

if a subroutine snaps at me
I hit it on the nose and say "sit!".

?
wink)

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thanks Don for your comment on "School Bus".
i was driven to write it
you are kind enough to read it.

?

Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)

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Keith, Thank you so much for commenting on my POTW as well as your continued support. Your comments are so encouraging that they leave me speechless. I really do appreciate it!?

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Thank you so much Martin for commenting on my POTW and for your continued support. I appreciate it!?

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

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Thank you so much for commenting on my POTW. I do appreciate it!!?

Comment is about Mae Foreman (poet profile)

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Thank you so much for commenting on my POTW. I do appreciate it!?

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