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raypool

Wed 21st Nov 2018 17:10

Some of your list of questions after my comment I have already covered on 6 August so that should suffice. Insults tend to go stale quite quickly unless they are very skilled. It is not obligatory to comment on poems but where an inspiration comes in I feel it is justified, which I did in your case. Perhaps you might feel the urge yourself someday. Other than that I am flummoxed - either I am not getting your humour or aliens have landed. (That's my humour).

Ray

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d.knape

Wed 21st Nov 2018 11:16


no comment. ?

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Stu Buck

Wed 21st Nov 2018 02:31

thanks john! sorry for the late reply, i havent been posting on here as much lately as my new book is out in the new year. im glad my work resonates with you on some level. i'd be over the moon if you decide to pick up my first collection. alternatively, my new collection, a chapbook, will be available early next year. if you have twitter, i can be found @stuartmbuck and am very active on the site. again, thanks ever so much. i just popped on to post a piece i wrote a while back actually and noticed you had commented, so again sorry for the delay in responding. i look forward to reading some of your work and getting back involved with the site now i have stopped tinkering with my chapbook!

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elPintor

Wed 21st Nov 2018 01:44

I've always liked the sound of your voice reading and, just tonight, found your (maybe) unknown muse...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oNMnWTNCFSU

Listen to the beginning, and see if you agree...

PS
I just want to peek back in and say that I mean that comment in the best possible way--I mostly wanted to use the opportunity to say that I really like your readings.

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Tue 20th Nov 2018 02:49

Hello dk....I'm alive! I just saw your message. I laughed so loud my ribs hurt.

I have returned to NY and am very busy getting settled in. I miss WOL and look forward to joining in the fun soon. Be well!, Jane

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walkingman

Mon 19th Nov 2018 16:04

I love this line from your sample

I decided that I was not Jewish enough to care.


I also like how you moved from style at the second-hand store to style in Jewish clothing. Well done!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 19th Nov 2018 13:40

Thank you Hugh for commenting on The Dance..a bit of nostalgia never harmed anyone...?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 19th Nov 2018 13:35

Thank you Jon, for reading and commenting on The Dance..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 19th Nov 2018 13:34

Hi Martin your comments are like a shower of rain on a scorching day. Refreshing and welcome. Thank you..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 19th Nov 2018 13:34

Hi Martin your comments are like a shower of rain on a scorching day. Refreshing and welcome. Thank you..?

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keith jeffries

Mon 19th Nov 2018 11:10

dk.,

You are not taking up my valuable time as I believe that as we comment on each others poetry we are learning all the time. Being on this site is invaluable in improving one“s own style. We all help each other through constructive criticism.

Keith

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d.knape

Mon 19th Nov 2018 03:22

Thank you Martin the Elder
for your comment on "The Space of a Lifetime".
I think you can put down your sign now.
We know you are a poet in fine standing.
Besides, aren't your arms getting tired?

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d.knape

Mon 19th Nov 2018 03:18

thank you for your comment on
"The Space of a Lifetime'.
You comment frequently. I appreciate that.
I hope I am not taking up your valuable time.

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d.knape

Mon 19th Nov 2018 03:16

thank you so muchfor your comment on
"The Space of a Lifetime".
Now I have the will to go on.

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Big Sal

Sun 18th Nov 2018 19:07

Thanks for reading and commenting, it is noted and appreciated.

?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 18th Nov 2018 13:50

Hi Jennifer, Thank you so much for reading and commenting on Jack..x

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John Marks

Sat 17th Nov 2018 16:58

I really love your pithy style. And that's not taking the pith. Brevity is the soul of wit and you got it! It is so hard to write but you make it, right? John

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d.knape

Sat 17th Nov 2018 14:35

Mothers make us
cringe a bit
'tween love and fear
which one is which
we live with both
but here's the glitch
when sisters rule
they love to snitch.


wink.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 15th Nov 2018 15:49

Thanks again to Linda and Pam for making us all wellcome to perform our poetry on this special day.

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Nov 2018 14:12

thanks for the comments on 'falling down the cracks in the pavement' Keith - yes - I needed some light relief after the war poetry of the last month or so - been on a tour of 6 gigs in 7 days last week delivering the set of poems and music that I released about WW1 in 2014. It has been fulfilling but emotionally draining - I needed to let off some steam and let out some jeans :-)
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Nov 2018 14:09

thanks for the comment on 'a poppy in winter' Taylor - yep - it was really all about choice - I don't think a soldier fighting in WW1 would have wanted 'remembrance' to be just about remembering (which I think is the red poppy message) without pairing it with learning lessons (Which I think the white poppy encourages)
cheers
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Nov 2018 14:05

thanks for your comments on 'a poppy in winter' Mark - I'm not really advocating the white poppy as the only form of remembrance - I think the red poppy is for that - the white poppy is more a reminder to think about peace when we remember. I wear both side by side because remembrance, on its own, is not enough for me
cheers
Ian

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Thu 15th Nov 2018 00:13

Thanks for your comment on Word Me Up Jennifer, I look forward to discovering more if your work.

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Ben

Wed 14th Nov 2018 19:08

Thanks Keith.

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d.knape

Wed 14th Nov 2018 13:35

cannot find your poems.
??

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d.knape

Wed 14th Nov 2018 13:15

love your bio. now that's funny.

is it bio-degradable?

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d.knape

Wed 14th Nov 2018 13:06

get back on your bike!
save your shoes
save your soul!


wink.

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d.knape

Wed 14th Nov 2018 13:04

I'll be brief. Thanks!!


wink.

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Tue 13th Nov 2018 21:12

Hi DK, so sorry I didn't respond to your comments on my blog, I guess I'm not sophisticated enough to get your meaning. Still loving your poetry though. Cheers, Kate

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Big Sal

Tue 13th Nov 2018 21:08

?

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Tue 13th Nov 2018 10:48

Thanks for your comment on Lost Hope Hugh. It's based on real events... So, so sad.

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Mon 12th Nov 2018 19:53

Thanks for your comment on Lost Hope Jon. It's based on real events. Very sad.

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Mon 12th Nov 2018 10:17

Thanks for your comment on my repost for Remembrance Day Martin. It was written from experience so your feedback means a lot.

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Martin Elder

Sun 11th Nov 2018 18:15

Well done everybody who attended and read, particularly to Linda for organising the event. I am proud to be associated with a such a fine body of fellow poets. sad I could not be there to support you in person. See you tomorrow.

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Big Sal

Sun 11th Nov 2018 17:15

Hey cool! Now I have a profile picture just as bad ass as yours!?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 11th Nov 2018 15:39

Gnomeless hilarious Hugh..?

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Sun 11th Nov 2018 09:53

Thanks for your comment on Homecoming Douglas. ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 10th Nov 2018 19:28

Hi Phillip, I am really enjoying reading your poetry.
Thank you for taking the time to read some of my work. I really do appreciate it...?

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Ankita Srivastava

Sat 10th Nov 2018 18:11

Thanks Avishek for commenting on my poetry

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Sat 10th Nov 2018 13:35

Your poetry is amazing

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Sam Khan-McIntyre

Fri 9th Nov 2018 23:31

Nice?

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Sam Khan-McIntyre

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 9th Nov 2018 23:29

Thank you for taking the time to read Times of Trouble, John. ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 9th Nov 2018 23:26

Hi Kevin, I really appreciate you taking the time to read Times of Trouble. It means a lot to have the feedback and support of my fellow poets. I too enjoy the poetry of others and like you do not always understand..but work through them in my own way and enjoy them very much.
The Smegroyd's Moonlight Flit..fabulously entertaining poem..isn't that so important I enjoy humorous poetry. Thank you.?

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keith jeffries

Fri 9th Nov 2018 14:28

Ben,

Welcome to WOL. I hope you will find it a valuable experience as you begin to write both poetry and prose. I have been a member for nearly two years and the other members, through their comments of my work, have helped me greatly. All the best

Keith

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Mae Foreman

Fri 9th Nov 2018 13:02

Hi Jon! I like your work! Thank you for your support too!

Mae

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 9th Nov 2018 03:28

Thank you for the support, Mae.

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john short

Fri 9th Nov 2018 00:04

Nice one Steve. Excellent portrayal of a tempestuous life. And an evolution from coca cola to red wine by the looks of things.

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Big Sal

Thu 8th Nov 2018 11:12

Thank you for sharing your poetry with me.?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 8th Nov 2018 10:51

Thank you for commenting on my poems Chris....?

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