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Michèle Vassal

Fri 21st Aug 2009 12:05

Thank you for dropping by...Yes you can hear me read(with Brendan Ring on uilleann pipes and clairseach), check the audio clip and also one myspace page!

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Cate Greenlees

Fri 21st Aug 2009 11:32

Hi Val, thaks for your comment on My Gramps. He was very special to me.
Cate xx

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Cate Greenlees

Fri 21st Aug 2009 11:29

Absolutely beautiful haunting work Michele. It interweaves so well with the Gaelic music which I love. I remember visiting Ireland many years ago in a folk band on tour, and we never paid for a drink all the time we were there!!..... the Irish so love their music and your poetry has the lilt and flow which this music accompanies so well. just love it.
Cate xx

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David Franks

Fri 21st Aug 2009 10:10

Hi Michele: I'd like to hear you READ your work, and the addition of pipes and harp would be a treat.
From David - poet and folkie

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garside

Fri 21st Aug 2009 09:34

Hi Marianne,

thanks for your time and considered comment on my poem 'silence'

steve

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garside

Fri 21st Aug 2009 09:32

Hi John

thanks for your time and considered comment on the poem 'silence'

steve

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steve mellor

Thu 20th Aug 2009 14:26

Hi Anthony
Thanks for your comment, and I can honestly say that I wasn't upset by it, but it was a bit like being back at school, where I was originally put off literature. If you read my Biog. it says that I write for my own pleasure .....
What's written in Time Flues is exactly what I wanted to say, at the time it was written. Whether it's good, bad or indifferent, it's what I wanted to say.
I shall leave the site to those more serious poets, and those desirous of improving.

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Thu 20th Aug 2009 12:57

Thanks Rodney for your comments.
Bernie

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 20th Aug 2009 10:06

Winston, I passed through Hebdon Bridge last week, and so wanted to stop for a bit, but the three-year-old had other plans. The area was beautiful, quite unique, almost "Tolkein-y' Goodness knows when I can explore a bit. Such surroundings must influence your poetry.

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Francine

Thu 20th Aug 2009 04:10

Bienvenue à WOL Nicky!
Love your poem 'Stuff'...
Brilliant the way it's written : )

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Francine

Thu 20th Aug 2009 04:06

Thank you Jeff for taking the time to read and comment on 'Deprived'... much appreciated.

Your poem 'Someone in Particular' put a smile on my face... funny : )

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Wed 19th Aug 2009 23:33

Thanks for your comments Anthony. Loved Edge - not dissimilar themes really. Must get round to reading more of yours.

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winston plowes

Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:27

Hi, Owl Feather secrets revealed! Have a look at the blog. Win

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winston plowes

Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:27

Hi, Owl Feather secrets revealed! Have a look at the blog. Win

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winston plowes

Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:26

Hi, Owl Feather secrets revealed! Have a look at the blog. Win

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Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:25

steve thanks mate for your comments on "Barricade " and "Stillborn"
Bernie

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Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:19

Hi John thanks for your comments mate.
Bernie

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Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:18

Spot on mate it is Thai, lived there for some years.
Bernie

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chris yates

Wed 19th Aug 2009 16:37

Thanks for your comment and would love to come to festival but would need directions

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garside

Wed 19th Aug 2009 11:50

Hi Winston

thanks again for taking the time to read and make comment -


circuit short mesh is intended ; )

steve

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Isobel

Wed 19th Aug 2009 10:23

ps. The tenet ends 'for tomorrow we may die' - easy to make assumptions - there are thousands of famous quotes I've never heard of.

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Isobel

Wed 19th Aug 2009 10:17

Far from it! LOL - Glad you liked my poem - it was Alfie you liked best last time - will get you loving them all one day - it's often all in the delivery. xx

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Tue 18th Aug 2009 21:05

Hello again!
Just wanted to say thanks for the time that you have spent reading and critiquing my poem 'No love lost here'.
It's amazing to see how different and punchier (!) it feels with the edit. I really like the way it has been edited too-it flows better. i'm at an open mic in Manchester on thurs so I'm gonna get practising!
Cat x

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Tue 18th Aug 2009 19:41

hi rodney
thanks for your comments i'm alive and well ;)

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Tue 18th Aug 2009 19:38

hi there jeffers!
thanks for the comments on the poems and keep up the great work :)

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steve mellor

Tue 18th Aug 2009 19:28

Hi Cate
Thanks for your comment on my revisitation to Time Flues. I've eaten humble pie (a large portion) for CBT. Whether she's still my friend, I'll have to wait and see.
The funny thing is, the original version was quite different to what I would normally try.
Is there a home truth in that?
Steve :-))

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 18th Aug 2009 17:11

Well, Winston mine is unusual to say the least...

...but there hangs another tale...or should that be tail...

Many thanks once again.
Gus

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garside

Tue 18th Aug 2009 12:39

Hi Cynthia - thanks again

i wanted to have the words strike like an ambush
and then leave the reader in the mirror

steve

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John Togher

Tue 18th Aug 2009 01:32

I haven't a clue if it was meant to be me or not. What was it on? I get around, but can't see why I should be mentioned on tv.

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 23:22

Thanks for reading Imagination. I like to imagine you enjoyed it.

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 23:17

Thanks again for your comment Cynthia. Have just printed off those definitions. It sounds very restrictive. If I get time I will try to apply some rules to my poetry. Read too many Mills and Boons as a girl - I just can't help writing from the heart. Applying rules is like putting rubber bands round it. How poetic is that?

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 21:38

Hi anthony

thanks again fro your comments and advice on my latest blog. I spotted a couple of typos and changed a word or two, I wouldn't mind you having another read and see if it's better or whether you would further edit - I've always shied away from editing my own stuff!

Cheers
Cat x

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 15:28

hit the nail on the head there, i tend to just write never really think about why...so thanks

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 14:14

Hi Marianne just a quick thank you for your comments on "Six Words"
Bernie

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Isobel

Mon 17th Aug 2009 11:12

Never have to 'hire' private taxis chuck - get enough offers of a free lift. Whether it were male or female driver would make a HUGE diffference. With a woman, front seat, having a chin wag. With a man, definitely back seat...

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:59

Thanks Cynthia for your comments on"Peace in the Future"
It is sometimes a bad, sad world is it not Cynthia.
Bernie

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:49

Hi again Cate, just a quick thank you for your comments on "Jimmy The Dog"
Bernie

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:46

Thanks Cate for your comments on "Imagine"
Bernie

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:40

Thanks Cynthia for your comments on the "Bakery"
Bernie

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:35

Thanks Cynthia for your comments on "CSSB"
Bernie

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:34

Hi Dave, just a thank you on commenting on "CSSB"
Bernie

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Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:20

I really enjoyed reading Boy A. Perfectly rounded off by the last two lines :)

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steve mellor

Mon 17th Aug 2009 08:44

Hi Winston
I truly appreciate your comment on 'Time Flues'. I enjoy reading your writing, but feel somewhat inadequate when it comes to commenting.
For some reason, I also particularly like the verse that you highlighted
Thanks again. Perhaps our paths will cross at a reading. I have just 'read' for the 1st time. I think Hebden Bridge is about the furthest I may venture, not having a passport to get out of Yorkshire. I'll have to try and get enough bottle to stand up again.
Steve ;-))

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steve mellor

Mon 17th Aug 2009 08:32

Hi Yolande
Glad you enjoyed 'Time Flues'. I'm embarrassed to tell you that this was Dewsbury in the 50's. We were always a bit behind the times here.
I really do appreciate your comment, and hope you enjoy the cross-over from music to poetry. I can't hold a note, so I can't cross back.
Steve

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winston plowes

Sun 16th Aug 2009 21:23

Hi Cate
Re Gramps - Not mistakes, just opoetunities to learn! I am terrible at spelling and punctuation but am learning (I think) sometimes others mistakes leap out when you would never see them yourself. Win x

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Steven Kenny

Sun 16th Aug 2009 20:35

Hello Louise!

Would just like to thank you for all the support you've given as I take my first few steps into the poetry world!

I do love The Commuters and Stuck Unsaid, they're great to read and great to watch you perform!

See you soon! ;-)

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Steven Kenny

Sun 16th Aug 2009 20:31

Hi guys! And thank-you all for the comments on my poems! I honestly didn't expect to get as good a reception as I did at the Tudor! I'm glad people enjoyed them!

:-)

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Sun 16th Aug 2009 20:04

Hi Cynthia the comments re "Fish" were about no way about you!!!!!
Bernie

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Isobel

Sun 16th Aug 2009 18:33

Never knew him at all - he died before I was born.

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Yolande

Sun 16th Aug 2009 17:58

Hi Cate
Thankyou for your comment on Second Chance. You are right we all bring baggage with us which we carry forward when moving on.
Regards Yolande

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