Hi again Ann, yes I love Cornwall, it's my favourite part of the country, yet we always seem to holiday abroad the last 15 years or so. Unfortuntely, we haven't visited my sister since she moved there, but hope to some time soon. Last time we met up at my other sister's, as she lives in Seaton. Longer ago we had holidays in Looe, Polperro and Carbis Bay.

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Many thanks for your kind words of comment Cynthia. I am pleased that you have seen in this poem (Bemused Rumination) what quite a few would be reviewers have not recognised. I am grateful and most appreciative for your input and time. Cheers, Frederick

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Tut and I thought no one would ever suss the place - a rich source of cameo material though I might add - and since I have a latte there most days round noon -just say the word and we can meet up for a chat

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http://vimeo.com/5456823

I think you could do a good version of this

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If Bertrand Russell couldn’t convince you I’m certainly not going to try. I’m not that evangelical about my atheism. In fact some of my best friends are Christians. My Dad bought me the book for Christmas many years ago, not that we celebrated Christmas. He was like the pope of atheism. I believe it had something to do with being a bomb aimer in Lancasters during the Second World War not that he talked about it much. His older brother had been a Japanese prisoner of war and became a Methodist lay preacher on his return. They would have some wonderful discussions, warm never heated. My Dad had the last word at George’s funeral when he started the eulogy with the line- I hope George is quickly coming to terms with the lack of an afterlife.......

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Hi Lynne - yes, Hayle is a few miles away but I often pass through it on the bus - on my way to St Ives. Do you ever visit your sister? Cornwall is great! xx

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The feedback on the protest poem- appreciated Laura.

The lines that you quoted were exactly the level of contempt and targets I was aiming at...bloody tragic.

My Best

Chris

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

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Hi Andy, thx for the feedback on my latest.

Chris

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Thx for reading Tommy- appreciated.

Hope you are well- my best

Chris

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Lynn, thanks for comments on Santa. Appreciated.

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

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Hello Cynthia. Thanks for comments on Santa. I can see what you mean about Dickens, Darwin, but the way I say the poem it would disrupt the rhythm too much.And rhythm is king.

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Ann, thanks for the comments on Santa. Appreciated.

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Hiya Steve – thanks for taking another look at Iconic. Yes – I think it needs more than one read to fully understand – I didn’t appreciate that at first. I’ve started telling people who the icons are now before I perform it so they have time to get the references (John Lennon, Lady Di, Marilyn Monroe, JFK, Che Guevara, Martin Luther King). I wanted to get Elvis in but it would have been too much of a squeeze ;)
Sorry you can’t make Thursday – Christmas does get manic with dos to go to – though I’m not too bad this year. Will look forward to seeing and hearing from you in the New Year – your stuff always makes me laugh! Take care and have a good one. xx

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Thanks, Isobel. Good to be back. Wolverhampton can wait.

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Hello Laura. Thanks for the comments on Santa. I've actually been Father Xmas 3 times at a kids' nursery. The red nose and beer belly help a lot.

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Hi Isobel, Hope you're doing alright. Soz I'm not coming to Wigan tomorrow as I'm working late (after the Christmas Party tonight!) but will get along in January. Hope you have a good Xmas and New Year. Just read and heard your Iconic poem - I needed to hear it a second time after Wigan and also read it to appreciate the craft of it as there are complicated themes (for me!) in there - it sparked the old debate for me in pubs, would you prefer to live a long life or burn brightly and out? I thought the recording was great also - I do love your use of song! Take care and all the best for Xmas. Love Stevexxxxxxxxx

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Hi There, Thankyou for looking at Ghazal (branches) you comments were and are always really appreciated. A detailed reply left on the blog entry itself, Win x

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Hi Laura - re Halo - yes the dreaded M word linked in my case I think to recent eye problems - you sound like a fellow sufferer

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just reporting in to say me little blue light(as in broadband is back on at home-yaye!!) catch you soon Lynn-thanks-Stef.xx

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hi Lynn-thanks for bunion news-alls fine-apart from my home 'hub' goin hoff in a huff-the bt man cometh-soon I Hope! sending this from daughters house-thanks for concern-Stef-xx

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Hi Win, belated thank you for lovely comments on my ghazal, not easy, are they, lol. x

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Hi Dave, thank you so much for lovely comments on my ghazal and for "Sharing" - ouch is right! lol.
Love your shopping ghazal too, it is excellent! x

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Hi Ann, thank you for such lovely comments on my poems, and concern for my foot, I think it's slowly healing. Hope you are getting over the sniffles by now. Take care. Lynn xx
(P.S. my sister lives in Hayle - are you anywhere near her?)
P.P.S. Love your Ruby Slippers! xx

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Hi Dave - thanks for your comments. I accept that some of the stuff i may put up causes some disagreement and even consternation, but at the end of the day it's only a point of view so hopefully no-one takes it personally. I thought your comments were very balanced and respectful considering you might disagree with some of the substance of the poem.

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Hi Steve - thanks for your comments. I'll hopefully get a chance to read some of yours and others' poems later today (at work!)

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Thanks, Greg. A win over the Baggies doesn't quite compensate losing to the Blues, though.Good to be back.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

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Hi Andy No need to apologise! Yesterday, I had to ask the window cleaner for his name again - I just can't ever remember it! It's Jason by the way.

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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hi dave; - god knows why i called john on my comment on your piece, but it's still a really good piece.

apologises again..

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LOL
Mmmm... maybe ; )

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Hey Gus, thanks for the feedback on Forbidden Fruit...glad you liked it.

Hopefuly catch you at an upcoming event in the New Year, be it Bolton, Middleton or Wigan.

Have a lovely Christmas

My Best

Chris

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I think you may be right I'm veering towards 'white fellas' without italics. The trouble is I write about a lot of foreign stuff and use a lot of foreign terms. It is often hard to know where to draw the line between words that are still foreign or have actually become naturalized. I also seem to be doing a lot of stuff these days that could be termed 'reportage' - which I have no problem with (I'm a big Auden fan) although some people don't seem to keen. In that context 'fellas' might be better and not so melodramatic. Its slightly dismissive tone is also a wry comment on white supremacy.

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Hi Greg - the feedback much appreciated and I hope the festivities go well for you and family this Christmas

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To be honest, I prefer "white fellas", David. For me, it has the ring of the here and now, and I recognised it at once. I could hear it being said, in a sort of growl. But maybe white devils would be a more powerful contrast and make the same point more forcefully. As far as italics are concerned, we italicise foreign words and phrases that haven't become Anglicised. You could argue either way on white fellas! I enjoyed it very much. I bought a couple of CDs of Aboriginal music while I was out there. Very atmospheric. But my wife can't bear to listen to them! She doesn't mind the Australian birdsong CD so much.

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Hi Greg Thanks for insightful comments. I do sometimes wonder if I overdo italics and in fact I'm toying with the idea of changing it to 'white devils' - It might seem OTT at first glance, but the aboriginals did think the colonists were devils when they first came across them (as late as 1964! according to an article I've read recently.) I was thinking also it might be quite a powerful twist on the 'white is beautiful' theme that comes across in the first stanza. What you reckon?

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HI Andy Thanks for the feedback on my lighthouse poem. Glad you liked it. By the way, my name's David!

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Hi Steve

Cheers for your comment on Blood. See your points, but as it's a haiku, the 'cold air' is there to represent a season. I could lose the 'the' on that line by using something like 'frozen' instead - something that would give me the two syllables lost with 'the cold'.

Course, I could just rewrite whole sections of it and change it from a haiku to a 'normal' poem. Am intending to rewrite a few of them anyway :)

Cheers again

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i am working on scriptwriting workshops for young adults at the moment. i have read your actors cv and wondered if you would be interested in collaborating on the project? where are you based?
would be great to chat about this x

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Hi Steven ,

posted up a link to some of my poems with synbols we were talking about at the Big Weekend, thought you might be interested. Win

http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=17830

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hi..thanks for the comment on just for fun..so pleased you did for i have enjoyed reading your stuff too.. :o)

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Hi Steve - thanks for commenting on the Abbey Road poem - line markers do make a difference don't they much obliged for that - just checked out your recent one 'Untitled' and saw how well it works there - read your biog too -awesome

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Hi John Good to make your acquaintance and glad you like the poem.

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hi Ann-just popped on to say-where the heck are you! hope alls well-S.W.x

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Thank you for the comments - you are right about the sprouts! I'm toying with adding something in about being over-faced with plates and guest places.

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I loved the down to earth Ozzie humour - it is in keeping my own. I can remember a huge bill board encouraging people not to litter. It said 'Don't be a tosser, take your rubbish with ya!' Could you imagine our goverment allowing anything like that to go up in this country?

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My clever wife won it all as a prize promoted by Mr and Mrs Hotels in conjunction with Waterstones. So it was boutique hotels all the way. Great! In Byron Bay - a fantastic place - we were in this big 'Tuscan' villa with never more than one other couple there. Just us and the 'housekeeper' looking after our every need! I've just done this poem about the Byron Bay Lighthouse. I'll bung it on and see what you make of it. Might still need a bit of tinkering.

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Hi David. Were you staying with friends or in hotels in Australia, or a bit of both? What amazed me was the richness of the Australian language. So many different words for everyday things that we'd never heard before. So many of them very comic! I started writing them down but gave up in the end and have now lost the notebook anyway. I suppose someone has published an English-Australian phrasebook by now ... maybe I'll have a look for it on Amazon ...

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Hi Winston,

Had to justify your efforts!

:o)

Mark

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very early good morning Winston-thanks for comments on 'journey'- most grateful-Stefan

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ta for time spent reading and leaving nice comments on 'me pooims' Lynn-but above all I,m glad I(and Banksy and Bernadette)were able to give you a laugh-sorry bout the rude language 'nice Lady'-my best regards to you always-Stefan.xx

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Hi Mark, since your profile was properly activated we seem to have uncorked a bottle... great! Winston

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