Thanks for your comment on my extraterrestrial poem Nick - I'm left wondering which verse applies to you ;)x

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Thanks Val - that's very kind of you.

Have a happy Christmas.

Fifi x

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ha watch yr fken mouth kaayyyy? love it

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Thanks, Andy - I'd like to read your 12 Days!

Have a good 'un.

Fifi x

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Hi Steven Thanks for comments on 'Coelacanth'. Glad you liked most of it, although I'm not quite with you on the second stanza. I think I need it because it introduces the notions of beauty & ugliness and the way they symbolise innocence/and the Fall... if that makes any sense. Might just be me being a lapsed Catholic again!

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Hi Greg Good to hear from you and thanks for spot on comments. I thought it was about time I bunged something on again! Hope you liked the little journalistic touch towards the end. I really tried to get the name of the paper 'The Daily Dispatch' in but it just wouldn't go with the rhythm. Was hoping to see a new one of yours when I logged on!

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Hello Martin. Thanks for the comments on Model Husband.You're maybe right about the rhythm here and there. I like a bit of loose rhyme, near rhyme, though, and I've done a lot looser than septum/erection!Actually, the poem's just found its way into a proper book, one that people pay money for! Hard to believe, isn't it?!

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Cheers K...
''K...'' as Bill would say.

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Thank you John - tell your wife she's very discerning! xx

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Cheers, Cynthia, re: your comments on 'Poetry Is For Cowards'. I'm not married to this version, but it's an old one and I've grown used to it. I do however revisit old ones from time and try to improve on them; after all, for art to have any chance of becoming 'great' - not that I hold out any hope of that happening to me - artists should think in terms, not of finishing anything, but abandoning it when they can't find a way to improve it any further. After all, wasn't the Mona Lisa found at Leonardo's deathbed, with wet paint on it?

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Re: 'FOAD #2'; cheers, gringo. What say? Should I try to get it read out on 'Poetry Please'? Ask Andrew Motion to do it? [Can't stand the man, personally - or his poetry, to be more precise. Turgid drivel.] Well, it's way past noon: time to crack open a bottle of turps and toast the Queen. Care to join me? I make a dashing turps/battery acid cocktail - helps the spleen when I want to write about 'people' who deserve it [present company excepted, natch]...

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Howdy once agin, pard; 'Poetry Is For Cowards' is for someone I once met at a writers' group: she actually used that line within earshot of me [the stupid, braindead #&%@...ohh, I've no time for morons like her, except when they give me something to write about, of course.]

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Thanks so much guys! You are all so kind!(In Sleep)

Anthony and John - I was aiming for a degree of poignancy - wot r u like! ;)

Cynthia - no way! (Mother and son). And he is "gone" into that deep untroubled kind of sleep that young people seem to manage. And maybe that sleep symbolises the unreachableness of the man.

Ray - re last verse - I'd like to add something to imply that skin/flesh has a memory, as they say that water has. Not sure how, yet.

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Thanks so much guys! You are all so kind!(In Sleep)

Anthony and John - I was aiming for a degree of poignancy - wot r u like! ;)

Cynthia - no way! (Mother and son). And he is "gone" into that deep untroubled kind of sleep that young people seem to manage. And maybe that sleep symbolises the unreachableness of the man.

Ray - re last verse - I'd like to add something to imply that skin/flesh has a memory, as they say that water has. Not sure how, yet.

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Thanks so much guys! You are all so kind!(In Sleep)

Anthony and John - I was aiming for a degree of poignancy - wot r u like! ;)

Cynthia - no way! (Mother and son). And he is "gone" into that deep untroubled kind of sleep that young people seem to manage. And maybe that sleep symbolises the unreachableness of the man.

Ray - re last verse - I'd like to add something to imply that skin/flesh has a memory, as they say that water has. Not sure how, yet.

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Thanks so much guys! You are all so kind!(In Sleep)

Anthony and John - I was aiming for a degree of poignancy - wot r u like! ;)

Cynthia - no way! (Mother and son). And he is "gone" into that deep untroubled kind of sleep that young people seem to manage. And maybe that sleep symbolises the unreachableness of the man.

Ray - re last verse - I'd like to add something to imply that skin/flesh has a memory, as they say that water has. Not sure how, yet.

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Thanks so much guys! You are all so kind!(In Sleep)

Anthony and John - I was aiming for a degree of poignancy - wot r u like! ;)

Cynthia - no way! (Mother and son). And he is "gone" into that deep untroubled kind of sleep that young people seem to manage. And maybe that sleep symbolises the unreachableness of the man.

Ray - re last verse - I'd like to add something to imply that skin/flesh has a memory, as they say that water has. Not sure how, yet.

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Mike-have sent you email and tried to connect
with you on chat but to no avail.No probs,hope the email helps.Await a reply when it suits you

Our best to you

Patricia and Stef.xx

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I'm sure Cathy has no cause for complaint with you Andy - other than you breaking beer glasses and dousing her with beer now and again :) xx

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Hi J.C. - yes, I thought I.G.'s post showed
just how much thought and care can go into these things. This was consistently inventive
with a clear grasp of language, and left its message without being either portentious or pompous.
And a happy Christmas to you too!

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Pleased to see you found Ian Gant on the site.

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Glad you liked "Akram and the Tank". (I think you liked "Akram and the Tank")!

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Glad you liked "Dear Sarah and Samantha", AE. I will say this about Santa - he might only come once a year down the chimney but at least he embraces diversity. He doesn't care if its the front or back flue.

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'Ey up, monkey,
Glad you liked "Dear Sarah and Samantha"

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Hi Fifi

lol. You are a v funny lady. Win x

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Hi Winston,

Thanks for the comments on the video - I just have to grow into the rest of me now!

:)

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Thanks Isobel. That was me at the end of the course, so I learned a huge amount! x

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Thanks for taking time to read/listen to Depression. Impressed You were almost spot on with the influences. I had recently re-read some Kafka and D.T's Rage Rage against the dying of the light, and Bonzo's Canyon was in my head, but alter Bosch to Albrecht Durer a print of whose is above my desk.

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I love him to bits Laura-...Lenny Bruce- Mort Sahl-
Richard Pryor- Bill Hicks- George Carlin :o)

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Hi Anthony,

Just wanted to say how extraordinary a poem 'Visiting Neil' is - and I felt that before I read the full story.

Reading it for the first time tonight (and then going back over and over it) I know that it has become one of my favourite poems and it will stay with me forever.

Your words are imaginative, conjuring instant pictures in the mind; you express yourself with a rare beauty and depth. Heart-rendingly gorgeous.

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Hello Anthony
Your comment is much appreciated
Meldrewesque? I honestly think you may have hit the nail on the head.
No hiding from the truth sadly

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Hi Lynn,

Thanks for your comments - I'm glad it made you smile.

Fifi x

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Hi Anthony,

Thanks for your comments on When I Was Nine - I'll let you know when the surgical reconstruction's finished!

Fifi x

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Hi Laura,

Sorry about the link. Try this one:

http://bit.ly/rPqaXx

Thanks,

Fifi

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Hi M.C.,

Sorry about the link. Try this one:

http://bit.ly/rPqaXx

Thanks,

Fifi

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Hehehe :D

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My pleasure, chuck. By the way, all I want for Christmas is a Dukla[?] Prague Away Kit, if you're offering...

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Hello Larisa,
It's not just at football and rugby that England and Scotland have a rivalry. These are just examples. The best way I can describe the relationship of England and Scotland is that they are like brothers. They may be rivals, they may fight each other but they are family.
Incidentally, my suggestion that The Good and The English was the answer to question 1 was a joke response. If you are entering a proper competition I do not think this will do as an answer. I'm afraid I don't know the real answer.
Sorry.

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Cheers Richie re 'Gordon' :)

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Hi John, Yes .Thank you. It took a whole block of carbolic! Thought it might make a change, Win

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So, as far as I understand it comes to RUGBY or may be to FOOTBALL? I don't know.

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Bloody Hell, Win! You've scrubbed up well. Nice photo.

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Hello Larisa,
"The Good and the English".
It's a joke, really. Although the English and the Scots are united as British, England and Scotland have fought each other for nearly 2000 years. The last battle between England and Scotland was at Culloden in 1745. When England play Scotland at football or rugby, the Scots till refer to England as "The Old Enemy".

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Hello, dear John!
Thank you so much for answering my questions! But...please...explain those words: The Good and the English.
With love,
Larisa

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'Ey up, youth.
Glad you liked "Everybody's Gone Serfin'". I think you can get it at HMV.
I know what you mean about "If you don't want slaughtered". When I've performed it I change it to "You could end up slaughtered". Her Majesty agreed it was preferable.

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agree with the bulk of your waffle
on me grinders milarkey
you didnt finish lettering
me fave word-next time just send pikkys.

Glad the cherubic th'archer seems to
have found his target.nice one!

off to see if I can stop writing shite.
catch yer when the shiny fing is over
the yard-arm.

phanxalot monsewer!

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I'm not sure I like the fortress either. Sorry to be so opinionated! These would be my suggestons: 'The Rack' 'Waters of Lethe' 'Cold Hell' or you could leave it as it is. Others will probably disagree with me and I might disagree with myself tomorrow.

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Yes, you are right about "Depression" title. Thanks.
I had thought of calling it The Castle but reckoned that was too Kafkaesque. Might settle on The Fortress

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Thanks for comment on Keep off grass. Ought to have said crackers, not crackin'
And like your Sam an Samantha letter, except am I to understand that Santa doesn't really exist - that is subversive talk.

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Ann - just a couple of things I wanted to say to you and keep forgetting! Firstly - bloody well done on setting up the open mic night, that's fantastic. I am thinking of setting one up myself in St Helens as we don't have one here, so if I do, I'll be in touch with you! Second - congrats on the radio show :D Oh, and there's a third and fourth - your poetry has come on in leaps and bounds since I've been a member on here (been nice seeing each other's stuff improve), and that's a cracking photie of you! :D

Take care, have a lovely xmas break, Laura xxx

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