Thanks for looking at The River, Rachel. I'm glad you liked it. Greg

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jhuuuubbb%$£

That's Fnurk for seeya ltr dude!xx

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Hi Yvonne,

Would love to hear from you if you're still interested in helping out in Cleckheaton on 22nd June.

Thanks

David

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Astrology and medicine combined bring us a doctor who can ... for the foreseeable future!
Don't forget to write the good write, Ta muchly, Nick.

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Hi MCN, Ta muchly for comment on Taste of Time, instants are the important bits that can be captured. A few good moments may help dispell those sour morsals that we all carry. Ta muchly, Nick.

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Hi Andrew - welcome to WOL. I love your poem, really touching. You'll find more people will see your work if you post it on the blogs. Hope you enjoy the site and will become a part of it!

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Hehe - me and my brother used to dare each other to eat all kinds of stuff - mouthfuls of mustard, food full of salt, that kinda thing! :D

Oh and right backatcha - it's a pleasure to know you too, you're a very interesting and intelligent woman, and you write the bestest comments ever ;D

All that talk of codes got me thinking too...ended up writing a poem that started off on that idea and went, ooo, somewhere else entirely ;D

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Hi M.C.
Thanks for taking the time to look at 'Out'. It's much appreciated

I have to say it's not autobiographical (I hate bigots), but sadly there are still many folk who aren't too far away from what the poem says.

Fortunately it seems to have been taken the right way, but I was half-ready for a slagging from those who don't know me

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Hi Isobel
Thanks for looking at 'Out'. I'm not too sure where I could read it - I was half-anticipating a bit of abuse, but I hoped that it would be seen for what it is.
A friend of my daughter has a gay brother-in-law and he is going to his stag, and it was this that formed the start of this thing.

I read your offering, and honestly thought you'd been carried away by some Wigan hunk

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' “Today a young man on acid realized that all matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration, that we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively, there is no such thing as death, life is only a dream, and we are the imagination of ourselves''.... Here’s Tom with the weather.'...Bill Hicks
:o)

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Hi, Roy welcome to the site. I’m an ex nurse and did my training in 1962 when I think we cared more for the patients that is done today. Had many a bad word with a ward nurse when my brother was in hospital. Finished up bringing him home to look after him with my wife, also a retired nurse.

Your sample poem added a little more knowledge to my old brain. Didn’t know about the old X-ray films.

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Laura, I am hopeless at codes, or nearly so, or mostly so because I just don't want to be bothered. If I had to, I would, like the runes of lost civilizations and stuff, but - for fun! - I'd rather drink soya sauce. (which I did once on a dare from a nasty, but very handsome, boy cousin, and oh -I was sick - sick - sick! I could not resist a dare back then, and I'm not sure I'm that much more mature even now.) BTW, I get real pleasure from knowing you personally, and enjoying your input on WOL.

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Thank you Ann. One of the benefits of being a middle-aged occasional radio 4 listener is hearing programes which give me ideas like this.

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Hi Roy - welcome to WOL. Good poem - really interested in the explanation too - I didn't know that - what a great idea for a poem!

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Thank you for your welcome Greg. Hope to meet up, maybe with Chuck Berry and Carol Ann Duffy in a bar during the Olympics...

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Welcome to Write Out Loud, Roy. Good to meet you at the Troubadour - and good to see you here! Greg

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Hello Danny - Welcome to the WOL gang. :)

Thanks for commenting on 'Stark Distillation', much appreciated, Dave

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Hello, dear Yvonne! Thank you so much for the comment on "Happy Marriage" With warmest wishes, Larisa
When you have time, please visit my site:
http://www.poetryfromodessa123.jimdo.com

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You...booed?
Who booed?
I'll merely say "You what, John?!
You...booed?
Who booed?
Did they know WHO was going ON?
(P.S. - HAH...pull the other one!)

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Hello Larisa - I visited your website and found it creative and colourful! And what a fine looking city Odessa is...the photographs show it to be a grand mixture of the past and present, with some beautiful buildings and in a perfect position by the sea. Its "Steps" are familiar to film audiences everywhere. You are indeed fortunate to be a daughter of such a fair (as in "lovely") and famous city.

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John!!! How could I not have enjoyed your set at the Poetry Spoke??

Your word use an subject matter diverse..You're materclass in the guitar ..well just outstanding heh heh..serfing ... I thoroughly enjoyed the whole evening and it was great to see you and the better half too..

Did you enjoy?..

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Awww RM....I feel as if commenting in the way I did I have perhaps spoiled some of your time..Who am I to know anything much..but when I read that the said bloke had argued to push his point home (pardon the pun)..now that made my blood boil for yer see I believe many are greatly influenced by what others say as it takes a very strong character indeedy to ignore advice/crit if you respect the person it is coming from..me??..I have changed a write because of crit from others who I respect (meaning I respect their writing) and found that it changes out of all recognition as one of 'mine.?' Dya know what I mean here?..

Now to writing groups..I think you have hit the said nail on the head with a big hammer when you mention the peeps there should be properly interested in all forms of writing, that type of interest is genuine and I would think a lot of good could come out of a session like that...but to put doubts in anothers mind...to slash their work oh dear me..I have wondered that if something happened to me like that would I have the guts to get up and say 'sod you' and carry on as if nothing had been said. Of course there is constructive crit, but still it has to come from someone that you respect as a writer..well I think so.

I was surprised by your asking for comments on your write RM because, well because I just didn't 'see' you in my minds eys loosing any sleep over what that bloke said..and that is probably why the said multiple iiii's happened for if you enjoyed writing the piece, if you thought that it said something..then who the heck am I or anyone else to dis it?..He argued..he did not say or give any good advice..that, I am sure is not what a writers group is for..well I bloody hope not..

It is such a shame that you live too far away to enjoy an open mike night..I expect when you run them yourself they were wonderful evenings..and I guess that after a time they lost their appeal too..soooo where do we go eh?..when we are at the stage you speak of?..Many times I have wished to be in my first year of writing (been writing for about twelve years now) Even if most of it was trite trash..at least it was fresh and new to me and I was full of words and ideas..annnnd I didn't bash myself up if I couldn't get it 'just so.' Have I made any sense at all?..probably not..I do hope you shake that group up out of its rut and that it goes on a strength..good luck :)) x

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Hi Laura, 'Encroachment'. Yes, very sad to see the erosion of our lovely English fields even if badly needed for housing.

Has a sort of 'How Green was my Valley' feel to it.

Appreciate your comment.

CHEERS.

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Thank you for your comments, I am very touched that you have appreciated my work. I don't think I am very publisher-friendly, but I will keep trying.

Relinquishing Pain is so raw and truthful - I admire your bravery. Beautiful read.

Thank you.

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Now then, MP.
I hope life's picked up a bit for you.
Glad you liked "Dear Marge".

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Glad you liked "Dear Marge", Lynn.

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Isobel, I'm glad my new found strength gave you a giggle. ("Dear Marge")

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Many thanks for your thoughts on "Dear Marge", MC. The performance at Wallasey went well. I wasn't booed off, although I was booed on.

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What ho, Yvonne.
Thankyou for commenting on my letter, "Dear Marge"

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Hello, M.C. !
Thank you so much for the help and the comments on "Happy Marriage". I was just touched to see that you've found time to read my poem. Your advice is great.
I didn't know the word 'suitors'. I had to look at the dictionary as at first glance I thought it was a synonym to the word 'suitable' though I understood that it was someone who suits I was not sure. Now I see. 'Suitors' is a perfect word here. More than that, it rhymes better: confused - suitors.
Please, when you have time, have a look at my site:
http://www.poetryfromodessa123.jimdo.com
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Love the new bio Rach - that's really touching - can identify with that

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Thanks for the comments Laura, I'm glad you liked that line, it's a true story.

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barbi, thanks for all your supportive words. i too love your poetry and am happy that love is the thing. i love writing. i love reading. i love, you love, we love, loves up. i just posted a poem about love. xx

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Hello John. Thank you for your comment on my poem "The City". I actually wrote this after a panic attack. I suffer from these and it made me think about how a crowded side walk would feel.

Thanks
Shirley

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Hi Gareth - welcome to WOL.

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Hi Danny - welcome to WOL.

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Hi Chris, thx for your note. In reply
1) All is well on the Rochdale Canal and in the world of poetry.
2) Yes Hebden WOL does not exist at the mo but plenty of other monthly events in or near hebden (Puzzle poets, Sowerby ,Magic words, Tod, 2 other open mics in Hebden also).
3)Sailing / Cruising even driving all ok by me. No I am not planning relocating.
4) You can now keep up with my monthly poetry news here - www.winstonplowes.co.uk

Carry on...

Win x

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Thanks for the comment on When One Night I Slept. I'm not suprised you have trouble getting up for work when you're posting comments on 'Write Out Loud' at 2 minutes to 1 in the morning. Thanks again.x

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Thank you for you comment on Canvas Larisa.
Hazel

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Thanks for your comments on The Funny Farm : )

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Sex Symbol/Sensible Shoes is very fine

"localised smile" will remain with me

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Thanks for your comments on "The Funny Farm" : )

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Hello, M.C.! Thank you so much for the message. Yes, I agree with you: Argument is the food of vanity
Discussion is the food of knowledge. Wise words. It's pleasant to communicate with an intelligent man.

Best wishes,

Larisa

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Hello Larisa - what argument? :-))
Here's something I remember from a wise friend of many years ago:
Argument is the food of vanity
Discussion is the food of knowledge.
...............................................
As I recall - we were discussing something.
I don't think I've met any real argument on WOL...that's why I enjoy it so much.
Best wishes.
MC

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Hello Fiona,
I have enjoyed reading your posts - you have exceptional talent and have found this pieces incredibly moving and poignant.

Thank you.

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nice one laura and yeah i'll give them a shout, cant hurt

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Thanks for your note on Tickling Fish, Cynthia. I'm turning over some ideas for a few more as I had so much fun writing it.

I was thinking about your nonsense poem the other day, and mine, and about different ways of writing, and it made me think of when I was a kid keeping those diaries...did you ever used to write in code? As well as the mirror writing, I used to make up endless series of codes to write in too. It was SOOO satisfying to do that I might do it again :D Really quite time-consuming though!

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Incandescent are asking for submissions for their second edition chuck - think you should send something off to them. It's a book too, rather than a journal, on or offline.

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Hi Dave, if they're good let them know it. Ta muchly, Nick

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Hi Larisa,
I was in error, Poetry should be read slowly so it is digested properly. I failed the first commandment. Naughty Nick. Bit too busy writing plays at the moment so I let things slip a bit, sorry! Keep going with your good writing, Regards, Nick,

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