No problem Kath, I for sure like your poetry :)

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Some good Twaikus coming through, now. Just one thing - remember to follow HeatonsTwaiku, so you can see your own Tweeted works.

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What a great new profile photo Ann.

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Hi and thank you for your comment. :-)

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Thanks Laura

Capitals are there because I'm too lazy to edit when I copy from word!

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Thank you Cynthia

your poem held much resonance for me, so I did want you to read mine :)

Regards

Richard

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Yes, I'm a stubborn mare as you can probably guess! : )

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Thanks Isobel! Glad you enjoyed : )

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Thank you Dave, your comment has really given me a boost, Katy x

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Hi Cynthia

I have just blogged your poem The Parting on www.katypoetess.com and put in a link back to your profile here. Hope that's ok!

Katy

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and I'm not telling you where to hold a saddo's balls ;-)or did I misread your intention?

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haha..thanks isobel x

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Hi Laura - not quite sure how to do what you said - but if you go onto Soundcloud then the stuff I've been doing recently with Paul Healy is under the A4453528 account number. I think the last 4 things are me and him - previous stuff just by him. Hope you can find it!

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Hiya - found it! Ta :) What a great poem, and your voice sounds so good on the CD. Blimey though - you wrote a LOT of poems that year!! :D

You could maybe just send me the link to it. Right click on the URL of your soundcloud page, copy, then paste the link onto a message on my profile :)

Aye, thank you, all is grand with me. Great to see you experimenting with the music - look forward to hearing some!

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hello MC,
Thanks for your thoughts on "Morning Star". As a trainspotter in my juvenile days give me "Evening Star" any day.

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

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Hello Greg,
Many thanks for your thoughts on "Morning Star"; a find, indeed, in Harrogate!

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Hello Old Fruity,
Many thanks for your thoughts on "Morning Star".
I shall have to test the provenance of a Wigan pie. Cultural cuisine over here focuses on a Barnsley Kebab, 3 pork pies on a skewer.

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cheers John - I'm 'not just a hat-rack' eh? I have no idea what you're on (about)but you are quite correct - my rack is not just for hats
;-)
Ian

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thanks for commenting on 'the Jesus gene' Cynthia - much appreciated.
I do like a good read - mostly the 'wrong sort' of books such as Steven King, John Connolly, Terry Pratchett and other of their ilk.
I also read a lot of 'alternate theory' books - UFO's, aliens, ghosts and the supernatural - amazing where your mind can go when you have it stretched
I'm also a good (lapsed) catholic boy with a wide range of literary and poetic leanings - mix 'em all up and something like the Jesus Gene will emerge

thanks so much for your comments - much appreciated

Ian

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Cynthia
a typical Yorkshireman is..........


male and

comes from Yorkshire ;-)

as a friend of mine once said - he 'likes what he does and he does what he bloody well likes'

he seems 'dour' and 'unfeeling' yet has a heart of gold and a soft centre - carefully hidden beneath a hard veneer.

he looks like a brickie but has the heart of a poet

he is......YORKSHIRE :-)

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What is a 'typical Yorkshireman' then? Will you give me some clues?

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Well never come between a man and his sport, well I will make sure I see you when you do your spot with Jeff and I sure hope to see you at mine :)

Regards as ever

R

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Thanks Laura - Candle Game - blogged 2nd Feb 2010 - a blast from the past! I haven't been writing much poetry lately but doing some songs. A pal and I have done some quite experimental audio things - they are on Soundcloud. I don't know if there is a link I could do from WOL to Soundcloud like we can do with Youtube stuff. Must ask some friendly WOL boffin!

Hope all well with you! xx

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Hi Ann

John Togher gave me a copy of the CD you contributed to in 2008, the earworm experiment. Yours is the first poem on there.

I LOVED it! All the glass tinkling/bells, your beautiful voice over it. It sounded like an old folk song, with the lines about catching a man and beating him. It's called Candle Game, but I can't find it on your blogs. Absolutely beautiful, and haunting, fantastic!!

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Can't do Friday Richard - over in Wakefield for the Rugby League big derby game against Leeds Rhino's - already made my apologies to Jeff - but some things just can't be missed :-)
Ian

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Hi Starfish, thanks for your continuing kind words; Steve

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Thanks for looking in on 'Life' MC. I misread your comments about sins that are red as 'read' and had a vision of me at the pearly gates and st Peter with a clipboard checking through a list of my past indiscretions (it was a considerable list)
best wishes, Steve

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Hello M.C.
Thank you for your comments on my poem "My Mother In Law, My Mom". It's not my best work but heart felt. I like your poem about your Mother too.

"It's a while now since she passed away,
And time has hurried on,
But still I hear her softly say
'You'll miss me when I'm gone.'

With each and every passing day
I sadly think upon
Those quiet words i heard her say:
'You'll miss me when I'm gone.'

M.C. Newberry

I just had to share this so others can read it also.

Thanks
Shirley

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Hi Dave - could you try to get to September Tudor please, so you can pick up your prize from the 52 Hertz competition :) x

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If you want your third prize (an inflatable toy ;) then email me your address :)

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Hi Rachel - I'd love to get you one of those lovely little ornaments but when I've priced them up they are hundreds of pounds. But don't worry - I'll get you the nearest thing I can afford - they come a lot cheaper in plastic!

Look forward to seeing you soon. x

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Hi Sarah - welcome to WOL. Hope you enjoy exploring the site. :)

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Hmmm - I tend to agree (about the hovering!) Hope you'll put some more poems on here soon - housework related or not!

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Hi Andy - welcome to WOL. What a powerful poem! You'll find on WOL that more people see work that is posted on the blogs, so I hope you'll do that soon.

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A long time ago now, I wrote some lines about
looking in the mirror and reflecting...
"You can still say "I have me" - so I have some
rapport with the sentiment you expressed in "Yourself".
As for "Life", I have commented on your post page.
Keep them coming.

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many thanks for your kind comments regarding 'natural selection' Francine - It was an enjoyable experience trying to work that train-rhythm into the words and i'm pretty pleased with the result - I'm glad you liked it :-)
Ian

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hi Cynthia
thanks for your useful and considered views regarding 'natural selection'. I sort of get what you mean about the second stanza - so may revisit it at some point in the future - as a few of the rhythms do get a bit 'clunky'. Glad you liked it though
Ian

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Dave
thanks for commenting on 'natural selection' - I had genuinely gone for the train-like rhythm so it made my day that you spotted that - very perceptive of you. glad you liked it mate
Ian

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Thanks for looking at 'Yourself' MC. Its another one of mine thats not quite right yet. I was feeling rather cynical when I wrote it but sometimes its good to explore ones other side -ones other self-
Steve

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thanks Richard - I really enjoyed myself and it seemed to go down OK - thanks for all your support mate :-)

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Well done Ian really enjoyed your night :)

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I think you need to be able to empathise to 'get' certain types of poetry MC - to understand why people from different walks of life, with different experiences should write and think differently to you. Clearly some people are able to empathise better than others.

I am glad you have decided not to leave any further comments on Mark's poetry. I think you've made your feelings amply clear to everyone on many occasions.

Let's hope we can all now move on.

Isobel

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Hi Cynthia,
I am glad you like My Dragon Husband. I put it on the blog years ago when I first joined WOL and someone picked it as poem of the month. I was dead chuffed at the time.
I think, for what its worth, that when we identify something that is hard to write about that is an indication that it is a topic that needs tackling. Things that are easy to say have probably been said before.
Peter is always surprised that people think the poem is a love poem. He thinks it is women who say so. I just tell him its subtle.
I would love to read what you produce if you tackle the subject yourself.
I like your comments on here. WOL commentators are a dying breed. Yesterday when I was on the site it said there was one member on. It was me.

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At the request of the previous contributor to my profile and his instant deletion of my comment - I have discontinued any further attempts to maintain an online exchange of views about the content of his most recent poem - in particular, its closing line.
Readers may draw their own conclusions.

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As I have never seen a ghost this theory takes me down yet another road of explanation to what a ghost is.

thanks

A lady I know went to her friends funeral then saw her across the road waiting for a bus.

Before the bus came she had disappeared perhaps this force of emotion was so strong she wanted to say a last goodbye to her friend.

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Many thanks for your recent comments harry :)

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Freda, I don't recall 'My Dragon Husband' from before, but that would be my loss. It is splendid. Please post it on the blog again for new others to enjoy. I have great difficulty in writing about my husband, in fact, almost an impossibility. It is very strange. I've often thought about this inability - or reluctance - or fear.

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Hi Star (if I can be informal)
Thanks for your very apposite comment. Just what I'd hoped for. Actually I'm more than chuffed with the number of positive comments. I was rather expecting a scholarly poet to explain in minute detail why our language works in the way I can't understand in my 'poem'

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Hi Isobel
Just a bit of nonsense, but it struck me how odd our language is
I'm not being too much 'performing' lately (if I ever did), but I hope to see you somewhere some time, and I'll thank you properly for the comment

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Mr Newberry.

We disagreed on a previous occasion, to the point where I found your argument so objectionable that I asked that you do me the courtesy of not commenting on my work again.

I have never had to ask ANYONE not to comment on my work on this site, or any other before. But the way in which you seem to enjoy attempting to provoke argument with ill-informed, emotive and inflammatory remarks, was quite unique for my interactions on this site. I left all those comments there and responded, point by point, to opinions that in places I found condescending, but found I might as well have been talking to myself as there was little evidence my comments were having any impact, despite my real world experiences being very different to your own.

Yours were the only comments of their type and a least one other person seemed to to think your behaviour that of cyber troll. That is to say, confrontational, unpleasant and less interested in creating debate than sowing discord by upsetting people.

As a result I asked you not to post. You grudgingly agreed, whilst making a dig about how it was a waste of your time, but you did agree.

So when I find you making the same points, even referencing the same historical events, of which you know I am fully aware, I was shocked and saddened.

That you felt it appropriate to post five times in 62 minutes, mainly repeating yourself, makes it clear you feel you are an incredibly important person, to whom people must listen. It is not an opinion I share.

Please make this the last time we have any contact, unless you wish to end with an apology, which I sincerely doubt.

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