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Becoming Real

From the mist,

A silhouette.

Too distant for image,

Too near for a clear picture.

 

An energy

Only present

When shadows dream.

The envy

Of everything

Made of skin.

 

It is dark,

The road is cold.

No sound

But the earth breathing

And occasional flicker

Of rustling leaves

Gathering in communal,

Autumnal graveyards.

 

The world turns slightly.

The image in the mist

Leaves revealing two secrets;

Somewhere a person is missing

And a shadow has come alive.

◄ As The Moon Prevails.

I Wanted to be a War Photographer. ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (8159)

Mon 3rd May 2010 18:44

thank you for commenting me. I think this one is wonderful! You can clearly imagine it all, like in a short videoclip.

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Lisa Milligan

Thu 15th Apr 2010 17:09

It takes real talent to describe something without coming right out and saying it and that is your strong point. The last two lines are brilliant. Loved it!

Lisa

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Andy N

Tue 6th Apr 2010 08:19

blimely, m8.. this is powerful stuff.. loved it - nothing else i can add (a rariety for me).

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 5th Apr 2010 14:44

The second verse is 'quotable', the highest praise I can give. I'll never forget the first time someone said that to me.

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