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I Wanted to be a War Photographer.

Living through a lens

Discovering countries

Creating sense from

Nature's disfigured corners.

 

I wanted to be a war photographer.

 

It seemed a dream - like direction

to acquaint meaning

Because where there is death

Truth is always near.

◄ Becoming Real

The Great Refrain. ►

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Rachel Bond

Tue 13th Apr 2010 02:56

dead on that...truth is always near...deadly

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 9th Apr 2010 14:10

Excellent, Kealan - the 'universal' ideas in bold fresh language. 'Creating sense from Nature's disfigured corners' is superb. You inspire me.

Editting point: when you are hyphenating words together to make an adjective, do not add spaces before and after the hyphen; they should stay 'tucked'. Unless this is a deliberate quirk, of course.

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Andy N

Fri 9th Apr 2010 08:12

enjoyed this piece, m8... the ending is interesting but for some reason i am drew to the fact more truth is always nearer instead off truth is always near..

keep em flowing however bud...

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