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As The Moon Prevails.

The sun stands tall.

Brave comes the moon invading,

Balance of light

Fading toward blindness.

 

Fingers pointed up,

Mouths opening,

The moon now devouring the sun.

Almost covered,

Half of it vanished,

Disappearing in surrender.

David and Goliath

In the sky.

This eclipse is biblical.

Its testament, a minute long.

But what lesson can be learned

From this

Temporary triumph of the moon?

◄ Fireworks

Becoming Real ►

Comments

Rachel Bond

Tue 13th Apr 2010 02:58

that the days are long and night's a bitch?
good poem x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 1st Apr 2010 15:49

Kealan, you are fucking brilliant! This poem is remarkable. (I could throw in another 'fucking' but that would be OTT, wouldn't it?)

Just adjust 'Its...' no apostrophe, and 'disappearing' to keep this work top class.

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