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Breaking

The dawn is breaking,
no sense you're making
leaving me, although
better off I will be.
No one will ever 
satisfy you, until
your heart bleeds through
the tough exterior 
that makes everyone inferior
to the image you see 
in the mirror. 

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 04:24

Thanks Tom and Kate. I also like poems that makes me think!

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Sat 2nd Nov 2019 13:04

I like this one too V. Though no one's ever better off without you are they?

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Tom

Sat 2nd Nov 2019 13:01

Really like this, it has got me thinking.

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