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He ain't heavi(ly pregant), he's my brother

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What world do you live in where men don’t have minds?

You are blind to the fact you had a gem,

A rare find

I could slap him for being so damn kind

Coz I would have battered you down with harsh words

Shoved your pretty face in a bag of dog turds

After filling your sockets with seeds and have you balls pecked out by birds.

It’s not that you’re a slut

We’ve all played that game

A happy weekend as long as some guy came

A big sexual ego hiding shrivelled self esteem

Yeah that’s lame

But you take things too far – you’re fucking mean.

Narcissistic princess, I’ve seen you before

You’re plotting revenge whilst still on all fours

You’re more than a player, you’re a psycho whore.

See that night should have been delight

Or genuine sorrow

But was met with a smirk, as your mind ticked

“Wait til tomorrow…..”

Money on the fact you drafted the text that night

Revelling in delight

That this might, just might

Get a smidgen more attention

And you’d be absolutely right…..

“I’m pregnant. I need a hug”

He carved deeper across his forehead ‘I’m a fucking mug’

And met you and wiped away your tears

Was empathetic to your fears

And put behind the fact you were so damn rude to his peers,

Played hot and cold

And copped off with someone else during your last date

Right in front of his sorry face.

He was there for you

Ignored his own panic

Behind closed doors he was manic

Trapped under heavy weight

Like an unlucky motor mechanic.

See your potential situation

Is other girls dreams

But I’m glad you aborted the niece I could have had

Coz heaven forbid it got your genes.









Going Tits Up ►


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Jeff Dawson

Sat 26th Dec 2009 11:24

Hi Mia, well no puches pulled here! Brilliant hard hitting and honest, I do like it when you write seriously.

Anyway, hope you're well, xmas going good, hope to see you soon and best wishes for the new year, Jeff XX

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Tue 8th Dec 2009 01:44

Aye, took me time to find a woman as loyal and as loving as you obviously are. Many men would give thier right arm to find someone who would invest in them some human qualities. You are obviously that type of woman. Fantastic.


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Mon 7th Dec 2009 10:25

Love ya Mia... Poem is ace x

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Andy Williamson

Sun 6th Dec 2009 22:09

Hi there Mia. You completely vented your spleen on this one. Highly charged, full of venom, but I can empathise.

Deep breaths...........and.............relax !!!

Take care
Andy x

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Andy N

Sun 6th Dec 2009 11:00

phew... powerful, very well written stuff, mia.. don't know what else to add there except i hope it ain't true

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Sat 5th Dec 2009 22:06

Oh Mia .. What a superb piece of shadow boxing criss crossing metaphors and spitting such bile ...yet still retaining a gentleness, very clever and honest, a sister of some strength indeed.

Augusta x

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Sat 5th Dec 2009 02:10

Read this a couple of times before I could pluck up the courage to comment, it is a very stongly descriptive poem which more than adequately describes your feelings, some of the metaphors you use are clever too. I think you brother on reflection had a lucky escape.

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