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sensual awakening

tear away my resistance

my silent barricades

rip away my tight control

steal my heart away

peel me of my inhibitions

free me of my clothes

lick my body into life

forsaken for too long

drive away negativity

let us be as one

steer me on to ecstasy

 i want to love again

◄ Son's Wedding

their first night together ►

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Lynn Dye

Sat 11th Jun 2016 13:51

Oops, sorry to spoil it, Tommy, ha ha ha.

I'll just pretend next time ;~)

Thanks for comment, appreciated. x

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 11th Jun 2016 13:46

GERRRRRRRROUT! - hang on your "old man"? You have a spouse? :~( (he walks away with hands in pockets-and shouts over his shoulder " I never liked it anyway)...

;~))

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Lynn Dye

Sat 11th Jun 2016 13:30

Rob - I think it may have been a fictional character in the book I was reading, but then being happily married, perhaps it was my old man, ha ha. Or perhaps I have too vivid an imagination!!
Thank you for compliment. xx

Jemima - thanks for the laugh and the mention of yoghurt - well, why not, I say!

Thanks also to R and Chrissy for liking x

Jemima Jones

Sat 11th Jun 2016 11:49

oh my sainted Aunt! "lick my body into life"does this include the use of yoghurt? watchout! this poem will draw the guys,like wasps to a jam jar Lynn!!! Thank you.Jemima.

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Robert Mann

Sat 11th Jun 2016 11:28

Lynn - who woke you, or should I say aroused you into writing of your carnal desires? Lucky man, whoever it was!
Rob xx

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