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Dotage

“DOTAGE”

by Helen D. Kennedy

 

I’ve always been a “dippy” girl

Muddled  and confused.,

Adorably forgetful,

Befuddled and bemused.

And now I’m in my “dotage”,

Confusion will ensue.

I remember fifty years ago,

But I don’t remember you.

I remember childhood parties,

Rock pooling on the shore,

I recall tall tales on daddy‘s lap

Ponies, dogs galore.

I remember summer sports days

And Pickie in the rain,

I recall the old time dancing,

And all the songs from “Fame”

I remember all my school friends,

(often wonder where they are)

I remember trigonometry

And I remember our first car.

And now I’m in the kitchen,

(I really don’t know why).

(I came in here for something),

I’ll remember if I try.

Did I tell you I’m forgetful?

NO, I’m not a silly cow,

I’ve gained amazing memories,

Just lost he here and now.

 

 

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Lynn Dye

Thu 7th Apr 2016 09:01

This is so good (and actually so me). Well written, Dusty.

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Trevor Alexander

Thu 7th Apr 2016 08:46

I like this, and can identify with it a bit - my memory's been 'spotty' for years!

I also remember Pickie, though - always freezing as I recall!

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ken eaton-dykes

Tue 5th Apr 2016 23:31

Like it

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John Coopey

Tue 5th Apr 2016 20:53

Sh*t wind and paraffin! By the time I logged on I've forgotten what I wanted to say.

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Dusty- Kennedy

Tue 5th Apr 2016 19:40

Apologies and thanks for pointing out the spelling blip M.C.Newberry.
thanks so much for your comments
many thanks tommy

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 5th Apr 2016 18:02

This is fun - and so many of us will identify with "the here
and now" loss. My long-term memory seems to click in
when I'm lying in bed, putting off getting up!
In closing, I mentally edit your last line as -
"Just lost the here and now."

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 5th Apr 2016 17:15

Your last two lines sum up very many people's issues on this subject Dusty. Well put. Tommy

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