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Prologue 2 (Ghost Story II)

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Cobbled together
the noise in the station
swept almost out of control
before the second shot
pulsed through the air,

translating footsteps
for broken screams

raking in chords
like pendulum drums
echoed across the ceiling

pulling together emotions
originally for some going home
or seeing loved ones
into blushed petals
trampled onto the floor
streaming through
stained glass

and in which the
middle of it stood me
watching history
repeat itself again.

 

 

 

 

(A short Second Prologue of a epic Poem to start as part of NapWrimo in April.The story shall start on April 1st.

I am looking for fellow writers to get involved with the story with either their own story or something within the narrative -get involved if interested)

◄ Ghost story II - Prologue

Ghost Story II Conclusion ►

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 22nd Mar 2015 09:40

Very atmospheric Andy! Like it and look forward to writing a part

glad you like my why don't you get a life II yes bit more of a rant with my JCC head on but bit angrier!!!

hope you like latest poem, Build a fire, its the poem/song I played for you and Petrova ;-)

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Andy N

Mon 16th Mar 2015 12:50

thanks guys. hope i can keep this quality up throughout april. big difference writing one a week than one a day but i have some good ideas in mind for it i hope!

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Laura Taylor

Mon 16th Mar 2015 09:20

Another great poem here Andy. Your writing has really jumped ahead in leaps and bounds. Loving the soundscapes in this. Very atmospheric.

Preeti Sinha

Mon 16th Mar 2015 02:40

Blushed petals, trampled. Beautiful and provokes such images....

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John Bastard

Sat 14th Mar 2015 22:48

I'd love to hear a recital of this. I think there's a lot of silence to be played with.

Lan

Mon 9th Mar 2015 11:01

Hey Andy, I really like this - my favourite part is 'seeing loved ones/ into blushed petals/ trampled onto the floor..' Xx

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