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Promise Me

When my hands begin to tremble

You’ll place your hand in mine

When my eyes become hollow

That you’ll gaze into them

When I’m at a loss for words

You’ll kiss me so the silence

Can speak for the both of us.



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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Wed 25th Feb 2015 03:21

I stumbled with the line 'That you'll gaze into them' and did wonder if you might have intended to type 'Then'... The spell correction feature on my computer sometimes catches me out by altering my typos the wrong way. :)

That aside, the piece is one many will identify with - best wishes, Dave

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