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BLACK BLOOD - a poem for the Great War

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My father survived the Western Front and the Italian Front in the Great War, promoted from the ranks to

2nd lieutenant, 1st Battalion, Duke of Cornwall's Light Infantry, attached to the 5th Division.  He was in

uniform again for WW2 and died aged 50 of TB when I was five.  I have a book about the 5th Division left

by him, containing some handwritten recollections of that terrible conflict.  This poem was the result.

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I stare down at the pen and ink words scrawled across the faded page,

Terse memories of a long dead father of a conflict from a long gone age. 

Like black blood spread on yellowed skin they tell their terrible distant story

Dates recalled, places too and names who fought and were sent to glory.

 

"13/4/18" - my father's hand recalls a date when comrades' blood was spilled

I read his words: "Hocking, Bell, Madden, Scott and Reynolds killed".

Someone somewhere got the news of fathers, uncles, brothers, sons,

The names of friends my father knew who fell before the enemy guns.

 

It is fitting now a hundred years from the horrors that they suffered then

That we, the fortunate successors to those battalions of brave men

Give heartfelt thanks, remembering them; and each and every passing day

Pass on the inheritance that they left - and let the dead still have their say.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 3rd Feb 2014 21:51


I was ten when the last one (a continuation
of the Great war)began. And, kid that I was, I can still feel and remember the universal feeling - despite the fear - of `up with this we can no longer put` (it was like a sort of
`wroughting up`

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John Coopey

Fri 31st Jan 2014 19:09

Yes, I think it was a BBC website which debunked a number of WW1 myths.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 31st Jan 2014 17:31

JC - I guess the fact that we have the freedom to
do as we see best (or not) is the prize that
generation fought for. No more, no less.
By the way, to offset some common class beliefs,
it is revealed in a forthcoming publication that
78 British generals and 179 British army chaplains were killed; and the oldest British
soldier to die was a Lieutenant Harry Webber - aged 68. And out of 3000 British Army
soldiers sentenced to death after courts martial
- 346 faced a firing squad for offences that
ranged from murder (37) to desertion (266).
These numbers should be compared to the total
of 8,975,954 who served in the British armed
forces. Extraordinary statistics from a
different time.

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John Coopey

Thu 30th Jan 2014 22:04

It dispirits me, MC, when I look around me to see my contemporaries hold so cheap respect for democratically elected governments (whatever their colour). It prostitutes the memory of those who gave their lives for democracy.
My views on radical change are simple. Persuade 10 million more people to agree with you and use the ballot box.

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