A Small Bud

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A small bud, withered

But just a few drops of rain

Beautiful flower.

 

 

I was inspired to write

this haiku after reading

Nigel Astell's poem/comment

on my poem "Despair".

Haikuflowerrain

◄ Despair

The Old Broken Doll ►

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Jon

Thu 11th Oct 2012 18:24

Great idea for a Haiku Shirley! Says much despite the brevity.

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Sep 2012 22:59

Evocative, Shirley.
It wouldn't have been a problem in the UK this summer. It's rained plenty.

tony sheridan

Mon 24th Sep 2012 20:20

Love this. I am a keen gardener. They crave a drink. It rains. Take care, Tony.

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