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on adopting a rescue dog.....

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We move in together

your eyes are beautiful.....

 

They told me you'd been lonely

though they said little else.....

 

My friends think you are a real catch...

 

But sometimes you look at me

as if you are expecting the world to start..............

 

 

 

◄ With peacocks at kew

wellie wangin' ►

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John Coopey

Thu 16th Aug 2012 21:38

I like this, Ann, even though I hate dogs. Good last line, although don't be fooled by that look - it just means they're about to break wind.
Also, glad you liked Assasseen. I do "creepy" so well!
I know what you mean about the apostrophe; it doesn't seem right on the ear even though grammatically it needs one somewhere.

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Hugh

Tue 17th Jul 2012 14:00

So few words with such great meaning.Enjoy.

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 10th Jul 2012 17:13

Thanks guys - he is a lovely dog! I am getting used to having a little canine presence in the house! I think we'll be OK :)

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Lynn Dye

Sun 8th Jul 2012 09:29

I really love this, Ann, I think it says so much in just a few words. I well know the feeling too, as we have our fourth rescue dog. Wouldn't be without him now. I am sure your little one will soon realise his world has started with you. He/she is very cute. xx

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Nigel Astell

Fri 6th Jul 2012 17:12

Moving in together
New home together
Not alone together
Feeling wanted together
Your friends are right
They are looking too
Eyes that start to talk
Expecting more each time - -
You look.

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