My Lifeboat
The whirlpools of loneliness
were pulling me down,
you were my lifeboat.
With all my effort,
I forced myself
to push towards you.
Your kisses, your smiles
your touch saved me
from my lonely life.
Comments
Good poem, Shirley, enjoyed.
Philipos
Wed 23rd Nov 2011 22:13
Hi Shirley, nice cameo of a poem. IMO the first line would read better without 'the' giving it added oomph.
Loneliness is a topic most people experience at certain times, some strangely enough especially when in a crowded room so the subject matter will resonate.
Great piccy to draw in the eye.
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John Coopey
Thu 24th Nov 2011 23:44
Lovely poem, Shirley.
Nice to see you still posting.