Waiting For A Star To Fall

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Star

Diamonds strewn across black velvet sky

Starfish scattered along the shore

Star shaped maple leaves flutter and fly

Star flakes of snow in the winter's roar

I miss you so much wherever you are

All I ever wanted was to be your

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Photography by Lisa Milligan

 

 

 

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Isobel

Tue 16th Aug 2011 16:13

I've never been able to write in a stream of consciousness so I envy you that ability.

This is a light delicate piece Lisa and works well as a short poem. I like Ray's idea of going from general to specific/individual. It makes for a sad, whistful ending. x

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