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Monday 28th March 2011 1:27 pm
love is forever
so is life
one feeds the other
love friendship life
◄ Scene 13
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Tue 29th Mar 2011 13:50
I would agree with earlier comments. Can only agree with the last line but I love the simplicity of the structure and thought.
Good to see you back posting. x
Tue 29th Mar 2011 13:42
<Deleted User> (7789)
Tue 29th Mar 2011 12:27
I like this because of how it addresses an big theme in very few words!
Mon 28th Mar 2011 23:54
Or starves the other?
Mon 28th Mar 2011 21:59
Like splitting the atom! Not that I have a clue what that's about. Small but perfect as they say. Not being a romantic I could argue with the sentiment but not with the control, and I'm still thinking about it. It's also short enough to remember. A great virtue on the performance circuit. I must take note.
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