one life

love is forever

so is life

one feeds the other


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Tue 29th Mar 2011 13:50

I would agree with earlier comments. Can only agree with the last line but I love the simplicity of the structure and thought.

Good to see you back posting. x

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melanie coady

Tue 29th Mar 2011 13:42

beautiful xx

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Tue 29th Mar 2011 12:27

I like this because of how it addresses an big theme in very few words!

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 28th Mar 2011 23:54

Or starves the other?

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Dave Morgan

Mon 28th Mar 2011 21:59

Like splitting the atom! Not that I have a clue what that's about. Small but perfect as they say. Not being a romantic I could argue with the sentiment but not with the control, and I'm still thinking about it. It's also short enough to remember. A great virtue on the performance circuit. I must take note.

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