New Song: "Our Never Had Romance" - Ó Cárthaigh / Schroeter

by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Friday 22nd October 2010 10:49 pm

New Song: "Our Never Had Romance" - Ó Cárthaigh / Schroeter

Our Never Had Romance

Part of the "Lady of the Sweetest Smile" series, the song is samg by Guillherme Shroeter of Brazil, who wrote the music to my lyrics.

LOVE LOVE SONG ROMANCE ADORE LADY

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Comments

Ann Foxglove

Sat 23rd Oct 2010 18:45

How lovely! He has a beautiful voice.

Isobel

Sat 23rd Oct 2010 08:34

I love the title for this Tomas. Also some of the lines and the simplicity of the music.
'And none to blame bar me the fool' is a nice line. I think the following line needs changing a bit though to make it flow better. Not sure also about the boats and ports imagery. Ships that pass in the night is a bit of an overused concept. On the whole a very pleasant piece with a gentle, tender, whistful feel to it.

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