I love the title for this Tomas. Also some of the lines and the simplicity of the music.
'And none to blame bar me the fool' is a nice line. I think the following line needs changing a bit though to make it flow better. Not sure also about the boats and ports imagery. Ships that pass in the night is a bit of an overused concept. On the whole a very pleasant piece with a gentle, tender, whistful feel to it.
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Ann Foxglove
Sat 23rd Oct 2010 18:45
How lovely! He has a beautiful voice.