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The Ceiling And The Sky

In my innocence I was brave...

And knew no fear,

No boundaries, no limits, no doubts,

Unable to imagine my spirit contained.

 

The sky was open...

Then came that ceiling,

That flattened the top of my head,

And crowded my dreams with fear.

 

The ceiling was clear...

You could see right through,

Unwaivering and unmovable it sat,

Intending to crush my dreams, so dear.

 

I pretended I was free

But it wouldn't be ignored,

With a heaviness that just said "no,"

That would follow where ever I'd go.

 

I had just enough faith

To touch my sword to the sky,

And from a small crack, came down light...

And I basked in its warm glow.

 

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Marla Joy

Fri 29th Nov 2024 17:17

Thanks for the feedback Stephen. I'm glad to be here.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 29th Nov 2024 08:25

A fascinating image of fear as a ceiling, pressing down, Marla. I enjoyed this very much.

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