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The leaves come down

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The leaves come down

And they’re orange and brown

And they fall in the forest

And they tumble in the town

And they clog up the gutters and gather in the grates

They're  the colour of butter when they shine on slates 

And they crinkle and curl as they silently lie

For this is the time when the leaves all die

 

In Autumn gales 

They are blown and tossed

As the sun turns pale

With the first days of frost

And they fall in the morning

And they fall in the dark

And they settle without warning

On the swings in the park

Once they were many 

But none will remain

Til the green sprigs of spring fill the hedges again

 

And in holes that are dug in the earth and the clay

Where the battle grinds on day after day

Men with grey faces and eyes set deep

Lie amongst leaves, longing for sleep

Once they were many 

But few will remain

Til the green sprigs of spring fill the hedges again

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R A Porter

Thu 28th Nov 2024 21:57

Thanks Stephen - the rhyme sometimes writes itself & I really didn’t know where it would take the poem, but I’m pleased it arrived somewhere that you enjoyed. 😊

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 27th Nov 2024 19:08

A brilliant piece, R.A. both in rhyming & meaning 👏

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R A Porter

Wed 27th Nov 2024 09:22

Thanks John, it’s different to my usual stuff and was very satisfying to develop & write after a sun blessed Remembrance Day here in Cheshire.

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R A Porter

Wed 27th Nov 2024 09:19

Thanks Stephen, that’s kind of you - and M.C. , of course (!)

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 26th Nov 2024 21:57

I paused a Schubert symphony to listen to your reading, RA, and it was worth it. One of the best I've seen on here for a long time.

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John Coopey

Tue 26th Nov 2024 18:59

Excellent stuff, RAP. Lovely melding of rhythms, imagery, alliteration and rhyme.
One of your best.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 26th Nov 2024 15:53

RAP - You will know Binyon who wrote so movingly for the
fallen.

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R A Porter

Mon 25th Nov 2024 20:33

Thank you M.C. & Ray - The Burning of the Leaves is a poem I remember being moved by at school and it is in an anthology I have had since then, although I don't know any other work by Laurence Binyon. I have re-read it since writing this and it was a big influence. I now need to read more Binyon.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2024 12:56

A modern reminder of the time of year - a fitting successor to
the fine Laurence Binyon poem "The Burning of the Leaves".

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Ray Miller

Mon 25th Nov 2024 12:02

Very good and very seasonal.
Men with grey faces and eyes set deep

Lie amongst leaves, longing for sleep

Haven't they already found sleep?

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