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To a Fellow Artist

 

It’s often asked: wherein does beauty lie,

In mystery bound, proportions magical,

Deciphered only by the observer’s eye,

Or in some poet’s words deemed lyrical?

I know that beauty’s not in sparkling dross,

Perfection is for fools; an empty frame,

In masterpieces, lines are found and lost,

And here, in life’s chiaroscuro lives a flame,

A caring smile, which many a burden lifts,

Your human touch, light of the world around,

Some word of comfort always in your gift;

In such a soul will works of art abound,

With artists’ hands, with voice and eye we strive

For truth and beauty; freedom here will thrive.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

29TH December 2023

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 9th Jan 2024 13:01

Thanks all for likes and comments.

Stephen, does the "perfection" of Mahler's 4th lie in its effect on you, or in the way it's written / constructed?
Carlton, the way some otherwise bonny women disfigure themselves in an attempt to live up to some money-grabbing charlatan's idea of beauty, is horrible to witness.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 30th Dec 2023 09:08

A fine and well-written poem, Uilleam. Yes, the hunt for perfection may be a fool's errand, but sometimes we come close: Mahler's 4th Symphony, for instance.

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keith jeffries

Fri 29th Dec 2023 15:51

Art in all its forms is the nugget of culture. It does not search or require criticism nor appreciation. It serves to touch the soul and stir the imagination. The final two lines summarise the poem so very well.
Thank you for this.
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Keith

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David RL Moore

Fri 29th Dec 2023 13:59

Some great lines in this poem UoC.

I especially enjoy the recognition that beauty lies in Imperfection.

The clamouring for perceived beauty, the worship of it in its material form is vacuous and repellent in the presence of the real thing..

Beauty and truth seek no recognition or reward, neither do they revel in self adulation.

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