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The Old Machinery

As young men, we ran through this town
chasing the madness
at the bottom of every bottle
and the warmth of teenage smiles
honeyed with the promise
of new experience

Spinning from bar to bar, pushing the limits
of our bodies capacity for self-destruction
and regeneration
snow melting from our clothes
as we sat and drank and laughed
in the Christmas evening air

Tonight, we’re trying to revive that old machinery
lubricating our shared memories
speaking in the antiquated language
of past experience
trying to reverse
the hands around the clock face

We were young men then
now, we’re something else
there’s less of us left
The barest of bones and dust
well dressed skeletons
if we squint when we look

Those times echo in the canyon between
that ‘then’ and this ‘now’ 
but I don’t have the constitution to return
I’ll always treasure those precious
fizzy memories
but I can’t restart that old machinery…




◄ Petrol Green Eyes

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Wed 11th Jan 2023 12:43

Haha, thanks Stephen. Mine is held together with gaffer tape and I think it's time to step away 😃 Thanks for reading.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 11th Jan 2023 12:29

Wonderful stuff, Tom. My old machinery could do with a good blast of WD 40, but I fear it's too seized to restart now. Lol

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Wed 11th Jan 2023 11:44

Thank you Manish! So pleased to hear that. Thanks for reading.

Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 11th Jan 2023 11:26

Loved the poem Tom. Thank you

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Wed 11th Jan 2023 10:03

Thank you Stephen and Bethany! That's very encouraging to hear.

Also thank you to Holden, Stephen A, Frederick, John, Adam, Uilleam, Kim, Holden and Hélène for reading and for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 10th Jan 2023 16:41

The canyon is the key, Tom. A fine poem of real emotion.

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Tue 10th Jan 2023 10:29

A great poem Tom. Thank you.

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