Falling
Another crisp Autumn morning.
I wake before dawn,
hoping I won't think of you,
but I do. I always do.
Though you are not with me,
I feel you, in the brisk breeze,
spreading golden leaves,
on sacred ground.
Comments
Thank you for your kind feedback Paul and Keith. This poem was inspired by the Goo Goo Dolls song Autumn Leaves. I wasn’t even sure which direction it would go. Interesting you picked up on that Keith. I love poems that vary based on the reader’s interpretation.
You have excelled yourself with this poem which stirs the imagination in a number of different directions. Well done and thank you
Keith
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Fri 23rd Oct 2020 22:17
“Your new dawn is just a heartbeat away”... adding this amazing quote to my book of favorites! Thank you for sharing beautiful soul with us Paul. We are blessed you are here. ❤️