Strangeness & Experience

I want you to be unruly
write hard and clear
about tangled emotion
those who don’t
make me suspicious
I know there are other things
like genocide and selfish parking
and the bruises received
behind closed doors

I want to know people 
who are walking antennas 
sensitive and gifted
nerves nakedly exposed
flailing in the fallout

I was raised to keep all hidden
I was raised to deny all feeling
“suppress, suppress
deflect with humour”
on the freezing football fields
“stand in goal and we’ll aim at your head”

Thank you, fuck you
the North East of England
I found a way to let it out
I’d have hurt myself or someone else
if not for finding the page
and letting it all out
fuck you, thank you
the North East of England

I want to meet people 
who are lightning rods
for strangeness and experience
hearts on tear-stained sleeves
sopping wet with hard-won wisdom
articulate and true

Move me
make me feel something
there is no shame
and we are not ashamed...

 

(A work-in-progress, but getting there...)

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Tom

Thu 30th Apr 2020 10:20

Ah thank you Grace 😃

Grace

Wed 29th Apr 2020 13:57

Absolutely loved this, thank you Tom

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Tom

Fri 13th Mar 2020 23:11

Ah! Thank you Rachel, Frances (please come back) and Kate (hi!) for the likes. This one is hugely personal so it's extra gratifying to think that people might be enjoying it.

Rachel/Ophelia, thank you 😃 It was an expression of pure honesty, many years too late and I'm so pleased you liked.

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Rachel (pen name) Ophelia

Fri 13th Mar 2020 17:34

Wow - I really like this, honesty comes easier in a poem......it's beautifully honest.

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Tom

Sun 8th Mar 2020 17:43

Thank you Don, Victoria, Ruth, Don (again), Cynthia and Jennifer for your lovely comments. I'll reply to you each separately soon.

And thank you for the likes; Itsjustmedownhere, Branwell, Dorothy and Mika. It's bit of a crazed poem and I really appreciate you all taking the time to read it.

I do love the WoL community; you're all so full of strangeness and experience that it's easy to feel at home here.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 7th Mar 2020 19:51

Nice one again Tom - 'write hard and clear about tangled emotion' -
people who are lightening rods for strangeness and experience' you express what you would like to have/be/know so well.

jennifer

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 7th Mar 2020 15:32

Bold and challenging words, Tom, and very well put. Keep working; you are developing a major contribution, especially to your own life.

I'll probably never meet such stern criteria. Doesn't mean I can't admire it in others. Although, being called 'strange' has actually happened to me. 'Strange' is a fabulous word, full of variations on a theme.

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Don Matthews

Sat 7th Mar 2020 14:23

I am a strange-type poet
I write such silly stuff
I should be tucked in beddy byes
So bye, I've had enuf

Yawn.....I like being strange. Un-strange is boring

He's stranger than normal Eth.....

WOL attracts strange types luv.....

😎

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 7th Mar 2020 14:14

The line about people who are walking antennas really resonated with me, I was coincidentally just thinking of this yesterday when I was doing yoga. Yep embrace the strangeness, we've all got it somewhere in our being...it'd be strange if we didn't😉

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Vautaw

Sat 7th Mar 2020 13:43

So many powerful lines in this piece Tom. Write on!

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Don Matthews

Sat 7th Mar 2020 13:27

I like this and what's behind it....

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