Snow place to cone
Snowplace likes home
Home like snowplace I know
Fireplace replace ice space
And snowplace in this cone
Take the particle of this icicle
And know your own home
A rash, a thaw…freeze-frame
Crows claw
Snowplace likes thaw
In this eye-gravel of frost
Hand becomes raw
Tears become acid
Breath becomes more
Heavy pulse in the crunch-step
Through snowplace to door
Cabin-fever rush out
Snow fever rush in
In this fracture-cube ice passion in
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 21st Feb 2010 11:59
The midges must need riot control, Moira. This is so good. I had to read it fast to get the fun, but I laughed out loud. And it has serious depth too.