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Sat 31st May 2014 11:33
Liked `Walkabout` Cool..:)
Comment is about David Franks: Walkabouts Verse (poet profile)
Original item by David Franks: Walkabouts Verse
Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
Tue 29th Apr 2014 00:53
Nice to listen to your readings and music
Katherine M. Kelly
Tue 1st Mar 2011 01:28
Thank you David for your comment and your thoughts. I will update that poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Mon 3rd Jan 2011 15:29
Thanks so much for your comments, David! There are a couple others that are lyrics too - if you have time, I'd appreciate it if you checked them out. "Bye Mommy" is one, "Though The Demons Are Waiting" is another and so is "Waves Crash". "Bye Mommy" is in pretty good shape, but the other two probably need work. The rest of my work is mainly free verse.
If not, that's OK too. In any case, thank you for taking the time to comment on "Broken Seashell". Happy New Year!!
Wed 28th Oct 2009 17:25
Thank you muchly David - would rather be responsible for that than a new Ice Age....
Wed 28th Oct 2009 11:12
Stop press - I must confess
I never thought my shoes were less
Important than a climate treaty
So pretty are my little feety...
Thu 22nd Oct 2009 12:23
I myself, Steve, have apologised for the fact that, nowadays, some of my blog-poems may be old-hat for long-term members, such as yourself. Also, for what it's worth, I try to be topical, in terms of current affairs, with some of my "daily ditties."
Melissa R. Mendelson
Fri 4th Sep 2009 23:36
Hi, David. When I first started writing poetry, all my poems rhymed, and only later did I drop the rhyme. I posted an old poem, The Raven as an example.
I hope you have a great weekend.
Mon 31st Aug 2009 10:23
I should just add that in performance poetry, issues/language don't jump up and bite you on the bum, like my poem just has. Language is soon heard and soon forgotten. Anything written down is there to be read and reread forever and a day - that is why we all need to be very careful about what we commit to paper. Never argue by mail (as some of my family have) - not easy to forget words that can be refreshed.
Mon 31st Aug 2009 10:08
I don't know David. Perhaps people just want to feel rebellious and naughty sometimes - I know I do. I just feel like venting all my frustrations in some way. Perhaps I should buy a cat, then I could go and kick it. Will probably never write another poem that contains so many swear words - it was just a phase I was going through - probably cos I knew someone at the time who swore a lot - it must have rubbed off.
Mon 31st Aug 2009 10:04
But why is there so much swearing, and shock tactics, in "performance poetry"?
Mon 31st Aug 2009 09:49
Sorry if I've offended you with my recent poem David. I try never to swear in front of my children and only rarely in poetry. This was written primarily as a performance piece, not for page. I tend to perform only in pubs where the audience is largely inebriated and accepting of all forms of language. I do take your point.
Fri 21st Aug 2009 12:05
Thank you for dropping by...Yes you can hear me read(with Brendan Ring on uilleann pipes and clairseach), check the audio clip and also one myspace page!
Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:18
Spot on mate it is Thai, lived there for some years.
Sun 16th Aug 2009 17:17
Hello David. Thankyou for commenting on my poem. I can see by your prolific output that poerty is an integral part of your life, reflecting your life's journey. Regards Yolande.
Dave D Poet Rhumour
Wed 12th Aug 2009 19:14
Hi David - thanks for dropping by to leave me a comment, much appreciated
Mon 10th Aug 2009 17:55
Thanks for your comment.
I like your 'Walkabout' idea, you really paint a picture.
Thu 6th Aug 2009 20:59
Hi David, Glad you liked 'Windows'. I am getting some material together for a childrens book so look out for more daftness to come! Win
Mon 6th Jul 2009 12:19
Thanks for taking the time to read David. I think you read one of the few that I wrote in free rhyme - LOL! Like you, I do like to rhyme and found it hard breaking the habit. Free verse does gove you a lot of freedom over the language you use though which can't be a bad thing. Till we meet again.
Tue 24th Feb 2009 09:58
thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed it. x
Mon 2nd Feb 2009 12:16
I have visited Kyoto, Tokyo and many other places in Japan, and there are still many places to cover. I hope to do some more travelling in Asia, whilst living in Japan.
Excuse me for asking, but what do you mean by, Trad and Metre? I am only just starting to develop my form and style in writing poetry and any new terminology still kind of throws me.
Many thanks for your encouraging words. Bel
Thu 15th Jan 2009 11:39
Hi David - thanks for taking the time to read my work
steve : )
Wed 7th Jan 2009 11:39
Thank you for your comment. It is suppose to have that feel to it but I do not always succeed in getting the stressed/unstressed syllables to meet the iambic rules that my english teacher told me to disregard! Other than that it is a narrrative poem that has a thought to be heard. You should read the 'hoodie' poem, it has a little more rhythm to it.
Wed 3rd Sep 2008 15:53
Thanks David I am glad you like my poems!
Sun 31st Aug 2008 04:45
HI David, thanks for the kind words. What part of Mexico did you get to see? take care Clarissa
the other woman
Thu 31st Jul 2008 22:17
Thanks David for the comment.
hope you enjoy my myspace site.
i'm still learning all this, so some are better than others. i'll keep practicing!!!!
Tue 22nd Jul 2008 18:17
To Carol: I just re-tried and it worked okay...but it's also on myspace if you'd like to use the above link.
Tue 22nd Jul 2008 10:59
Hi David, thanks for your kind comment. I have tried to open your adio sample above but its not working on my computer.
Tue 22nd Jul 2008 10:05
Thanks for your comment! Air Cav's actually a psychedelic indie band but I do play folk too.
Tue 8th Jul 2008 22:43
nice writing, with ur poetry i feel like im there with u..if that makes sence
thanx for the comment
Alison Mary Dunn
Sun 20th Apr 2008 18:20
"in the dim light of a sleepy sun" I'm traveling with you David, traveling with you.......!
thanks for leaving an comment 2.
Sun 13th Apr 2008 10:55
Thanks, Tomas - that introductory poem/experience was really the catalyst for my whole collection; and I've just enjoyed a visit to your profile.
Sun 13th Apr 2008 01:40
I loved the Pen poem!!! Fantastic!!!
Tue 1st Jan 2008 19:44
Thanks, Ricardo: and, if it's okay, I'll respond with another (introductory) peom from my collection walkaboutsverse.741.com -
Poem 3 of 230: PICTURES
Photographs and, more so, painted-
Pictures of people and places,
For ends, involve in some cases
Adjustment of what was gathered.
With restrained artistic licence,
To make metre and rhyme with sense,
All matters related here -
Save the love-songs, to be clear -
Did happen to me, no fear,
And time-ordered they appear.
(C) David Franks 2003
Mon 10th Dec 2007 11:08
What i especially like about this poem, and i like it v much, is that it is not 'laying any big message on us', that it exists as itself. That is one of the hardest things to learn, to let it speak for itself. We can slant and select to 'tidy up' a piece, but to contort it to what we want to say is most of our biggest blunders
All power to you!
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